Reviews for Second Chance |
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salexa1122 chapter 31 . 7/14 I really like this story. Just reread the whole thing. Thank you! |
Loralie Gold Dream chapter 31 . 7/13 I honestly don't blame the ANBU for following Fugaku's orders, because it had been a LONG night with a bunch of emotional drama n bullshit. Also, pretty sure everyones gonna be pulling triple shifts with 45 min power naps(at best), every 7 and a half hours. |
ta.shrivastava chapter 31 . 7/13 Man, these characters just can't catch a break, can they? When Gaara told Naruto about his seal, and when he started to acert that he fixed it, I thought that someone interfered with their traveling back to the past. But it turns out that Naruto miscalculated. Not many writers go down that root. |
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 31 . 7/13 I absolutely love this fanfic so far! The storyline is unique and well-written and I love how you portrayed the characters. I can't wait to read more! :D |
NotaSheep chapter 31 . 7/12 Thanks for the new chapter! |
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 23 . 7/12 Yeeeesss! Fully grown, slightly Kyuubified, Naruto is there! (My guess at least) |
Tincancan chapter 31 . 7/12 Omg great story I'm so hooked |
TigrezzTail chapter 31 . 7/11 Oh poor Naruto. Thinking he's doing good by his actions and finding out that there were consequences, some rather horrifying. He's never dealt well with guilt. |
YetAnotherAnon chapter 3 . 7/11 I've read this chapter much more closely than the previous ones, and I now regret going through the previous ones so quickly. Wonderful work setting the contrasting tones from the two POVs, and especially with the rambling feel from the first. |
YetAnotherAnon chapter 2 . 7/11 Awesome idea! Given the number of fanfics, I'm sure someone somewhere already wrote it, but this is the first time I've read of this concept. Really neat! On a quick read, I also didn't notice any errors or awkward phrasing. If you want, I could also give a detailed edit of each chapter as I read them; I can send you the next chapter as an example. |
ForestShadeau chapter 31 . 7/11 Thanks for the hard work love the story _ |
ThelittleKing chapter 31 . 7/11 Great update, looking forward to the next one |
Shy911 chapter 31 . 7/10 Oof. Theyre going to find them! I hope everything goes well! |
Dom2040 chapter 1 . 7/10 Interesting story ! Keep up the good work! |
sunnysarko chapter 30 . 6/19 I've been following this story for a while, I'm so glad to see another update! I reread everything to catch up and my heart's racing from the action lol I'm excited to see how all of this plays out- thanks for updating, and I look forward to the next chapter! Take care of yourself :) |