Can't wait to see what happens next.

I know this is old and usually I stay away from old, unfinished fics but I couldn't help but read this. It sounded interesting, and boy it did not disappoint. Truly incredible, very compelling! I'm sad there is not more; it's exactly the type of story I've been wanting to read, not to mention A stellar writing. I'm glad you shared what you did. I loved it. :)

I like it one where roman survives are my favorite

Really well written I really enjoy this I love this show and since Neo is gone I have to read these things where what if she joined team RWBY. So keep doing what you do okay

need more

I really enjoyed this. Its honetly kind of how i expected it to actually happen in the actual show. Hopefully youll be vale to write more soon

I would love to read more, your story is interesting. But I totally understand the lack of motivation, inspiration, and ideas that sometimes occurs.

no chapter 2? Ah, I like it.

I really hope you consider updating, I want to see what happens next! : )

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Hey, this was really good! I could totally belive that neo would want to save roman. Keep writing!

Nice! It makes sense for Neo to use her scroll to write messages as a way to communicate wit others. Kinda like Celty from Durarara anime does it lol.

As for the story, I like this concept. The Neo we see on the show kinda lacks personality, but this one has catched my interest. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next one xD. TJ out

Good start - look forward to seeing where it goes.

I'd very much like to read more, it'd be especially interesting if Roman and Neo have to work with RNJR with Ruby and Roman having the same snark additude toward each other (but without the trying to fight part)

This needs to be a full fledged story.