first of all I hope you're fully healed now because I would like to continue reading your story to see where it goes to see if it becomes a good story or bad one.I also like the idea of the harem that another reader sent you that is another idea that not a lot of people use or think characters that you bashing are can be changed you know since this is your fanfic you can fix their Sakura in the Naruto Shippuden in the beginning started to change for the better and the creator of Naruto decide to give up on her but you can fix that you know and you could have Hinata and Sakura become naruto's wives because he'd have to deal with more than one wife it would be trying to be romantic to each of his girls without favoring the it would bring another level to The Adventure.

please update it's really good

first of all it is good story but you need to fix your grammar bad other wise it will drive me up the wall maybe get a beta tester that will help you

Take all the time you need and hope for more soon

Please don't continue. Your stories are shit.

you need to make more of this i love it so far

that was great

Don't take this the wrong way but you might as well end the story at the end of the next chapter with how fast you appear to be going.

Should make it a harem story

Ooc delusional shit

great chapter bro keep it up

Hey hey! I think your onti something here (I love Timetravel fics.) One thing I do recommend is that you try to slow down a little, remember you are writing for yourself, you don't owe us readers anything. Take your time and enjoy every single part of the story! I'll cheer you on!

slow down

A little convoluted but good!