Reviews for Little Wonders |
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Mrotrax chapter 1 . 2/11/2019 Oh my...this is so heartbreaking You've captured the joys and tragedy of parenthoood... I actually teared up reading this, it was so good I would love to see more of this story idea, but I also love what we have. Thank you and keep up the great work |
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 8/7/2018 Oh shit... I so did not see this coming! Please update soon! |
Percy-Jackson2004 chapter 1 . 1/14/2018 I really love this! Could you make a sequel or another chapter? Please? |
Moonview chapter 1 . 8/29/2017 I feel like this could be a good AU. |
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 I'll start off by saying that Zarkon's horribly OoC in this, but this brings me directly to the actual point I want to make. The reason OoCness is an issue in fanfiction is because when a character is OoC, it's just an OC which has been given a canon characters name. Normally when this happens, I find myself feeling like I'm not reading a fanfic, but original fiction. In this case though I did feel like I was reading a V:LD fanfic. I can't remember a time that's happened before, but then again, I actually thought Zarkon was Keith's mother, or an OC. The prose was rough, but I found myself liking her a lot. That said, things did get a little weird after I realized it was supposed to be Zarkon, but also with Keith having visible traits despite being Galra/Human. It's also not explained how Zarkon met a human either. Despite the fact it is OoC for Zarkon, it kind of also plays into the idea that there might have always been some good in him, which I found myself liking. Despite the other issues, the fact you put that theme there as well as you did really made this one for me. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 This was too freaking cute and sad! I loved every word of this fic and I have to wonder and hope that there will be more(?). Maybe little one-shots of the Zarkon Family? But whatever you decide to do, it'll be great! Keep up the great work 3 |