Thanks for writing these stories. They are some of the best ones on this site. I have no idea why more people are not reading them. Thanks for your writing them!

I just read all three of these this week and I’m the worst reviewer ever but honestly they’re great and I really hope you pick them up again one day.

it's been a wild ride and I love the way you've described the holidays and magic. I'm really looking forward to looking through your other work and have added this to my follow list for when you post more. thanks for making a quality series so far

Yay! I'm all caught up now! Can't wait for more of this!

Well, whadda ya know-Godric Gryffindor built a torture chamber. Just when I thought this setting couldn't get any worse.

Fortunately, this setting's magic lets you violate Conservation of Energy by, say, conjuring a few barrels of gunpowder, Banishing them into the Room of Tempering, and tossing a fire spell after them.

Live this story. I do hope you'll be able to finish it, but I know how life works. Regardless, thank you for sharing this gem with us .

I've changed my mind, ship-wise. I ship Marille, or Nary. (NevilleXMary)

Although I must admit I’m disappointed that you haven’t updated in a while, I still come back and reread your work every once and a while. What I love about this more than anything else is your interpretation of magic (especially ritual magic). It’s just fantastic and unique and frankly amazing. Plus, your version of Lily Potter is fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. I love her.

"But I – I want to do something right now. I want to make it better."

oh oof, I know that feel, Mary.

they are only to come to the grounds if they sense Black's presence

oh my god i was today years old when i realized that the dementors in canon showed up at that specific game *because Sirius was there*

dementors suppressing happiness to feed on misery is a good interpretation also, imo

I just got to the end of this series. I enjoyed it and hope that it isn't dead. The first two stories were really good but this one seemed to lose its plot as we got toward the end. Your author's notes commented on writers block. I found myself thinking you don't know where you are trying to go. My advice, based on nothing but my own sense of this story floundering toward the end is that you need to figure out what you want to do for book four. Answer the following questions:

1) Will Sirius survive book 3? If so how will he relate to Mary going forward?
2) Will Pettigrew survive? If so, will he escape or be jailed?
3) Will Hermione keep her time turner? If not, why not?
4) Will Mary start to develop a conscious political agenda or keep trying to avoid politics? If so why? And what agenda? And what convinces her to try and change the world?

After that write to the ending you want.

I have enjoyed this story, thank you for all the hard work you put into it. I hope to see more!

Nicholas

I really love this series, the writing and just everything about it! Cant wait for the next update.

So for whatever crazy reason I ended up re-reading your entire Mary Potter series and just finished up until now. This really is a fabulous series.

I truly can't wait to see how and when you get Mary and the rest to realize the Black/Peter plot switch and how you'll go about the events of the end of book 3- whether or not SB will end up running like in OT or if he'll end up in a different position; free or dead or whatever... I likewise can't wait to read more about Mary's growth into a woman, a political force, a magic user, etc. It'll be undoubtedly amusing to see her eventually take an interest in someone, be it male or female, see what kind of magical talents begin to shine, how things evolve with book 4 and the TWT and beyond.

Keep up the great work and update soon!

I love this story so much! You do plan to continue it right?

I just want to say that I was pleasantly surprised that this has returned, and spent the past few days rereading the first two books as well as the rest of this one before reading this update.

Thanks for the update! I hope things go well for you, and am looking forward to the next.