Reviews for The Warriors With Silver Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad. Could use some work. Feels like it's going a little fast. The kids pretty much readily accepted the stuff about magic. |
![]() ![]() I wonder if this will ever a Reading fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and since i can't delete my reviews just ignore them |
![]() ![]() ![]() or you can make a chibi version of this |
![]() ![]() ![]() the reason i want a rosario vampire fanfic because the ones i read are cringy and the way you write your stories isn't |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to continue the sequel because you haven't made a chapter since 2019 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story dude |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been a fantastic read saw the sequel only has one chapter but I will enjoy it none the less keep up the great work. Lord Halcyon |
![]() ![]() ![]() what is Arianna s semebalance |
![]() ![]() ![]() you've added both a Pokémon move and a D&D monk subtype you have my approval |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was hoping to be on our own team |
![]() ![]() ![]() “I’ve been working on this technique for months, but I never made any real progress until I came to Beacon.” “What are you gonna on about kid?” Qrow says as the hairs on the back of his neck begin to stand at attention. “Now I’ll show you the Kaioken!Kaio-what? OooooooF.” “BODY DON’T FAIL ME NOW!” |
![]() ![]() ![]() my eyes hurt so much from how thick the wall of words were if this doesnt improve on your later works i will have all right to complain about you making stupid mistakes |
![]() ![]() ![]() That interaction with Jaune and Pyrra was spectacular |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not enjoyable |