Reviews for Dreams of Future Past
excessivelyperky chapter 60 . 20h
Good find with the diadem!

You know, you would think that the Room of Requirement could cough up a few things to buy for Christmas presents; if nothing else, the Room of Lost Things ought to have a few goodies that can repaired and/or charmed into decent presents.

And Peter ought to rethink his desire to betray his friends and help Voldemort, what he's doing now isn't helping him one bit (I never did quite get his motivation for doing this in the first place).

Once more, I wonder why nobody has tried bribery yet...
excessivelyperky chapter 59 . 7/30
Ah, the Come and Go Room! Snape could find enough clothing to actually look good the next year (something that Dumbledore is charmingly unconcerned with) since he might know Muggle as well as Magical means of repairing things, as might Lily.

Hope they find the diadem!

As for the Prophecy Keeper, just killing her was stupid. Obliviate her and put her back, they might need her again someday for something else. But who said Tom Riddle thought ahead for five minutes?
excessivelyperky chapter 58 . 7/28
Aha! A little recycling of Half Blood Prince with a side of Slughorn, and another threat from inside the castle itself (though to be honest, Snape should be used to those).

And...a hint where the Come and Go Room might just be (not that anyone has ever used it for snogging, oh noes!).
excessivelyperky chapter 57 . 7/26
The other three Marauders really need to sit down with Peter and find out if he's still one of them are not. He has to come back to that room to sleep, after all, he can't avoid them forever.

And I hope that Lily and Severus find the Room of Lost Things-for one thing, there's tons of stuff that could be made over with magic so Snape doesn't have to wear rags all the time.
excessivelyperky chapter 56 . 7/24
Good chapter. Actually, talking to ghosts and to people who know Ravenclaw history could be quite productive. And it couldn't hurt to talk to house elves, either. Lily and Severus will have Christmas there so they will have time.

(Lily and Sev could get a Portkey to go to the wedding if they asked Dumbledore or McGonagall, but Lily is probably right and Petunia doesn't want her there. Then again, Lily does tend to outshine her older sister whenever she's there, so it might not be all spite involved there).
excessivelyperky chapter 55 . 7/23
That's so sweet about the Patronuses! And I'm glad that James isn't fixated on Lily any more.

And the memory about delivering a Prophecy-this could be very interesting given the AU nature of this story, but knowing that Lucius has a Horcrux and that the Lestranges have one, too-that could be very helpful indeed.
excessivelyperky chapter 54 . 7/20
Good chapter. Still can't believe the Slytherins haven't tried bribery yet, what is wrong with those people?

But yes, Peter laying it on thick around Sirius might well work. (though he still hasn't told Regulus about the Map, he has some limits).
excessivelyperky chapter 53 . 7/17
Good start to the new year, but I hope Severus also gets some good dueling practice-a few displays of his prowess would slow quite a few people down. Also, Lily needs the same training, since Peter could easily go after Lily, or a couple of the other DE wannabes. Also, there were other DEs from other houses, not just Slytherin and Peter.
excessivelyperky chapter 52 . 7/14
Yes, Dumbledore treats both Snape and Sirius Black the same, even though Sirius Black tried to murder Snape at least twice. How nice.

But at least the Severus of this story never had to go through that.

However, isolating Peter is certain to drive him into becoming a Death Eater. That's not the best idea.

Good chapter, but the 'rents really are going to catch them snogging at this rate.
excessivelyperky chapter 51 . 7/13
Now Lily knows how far Dumbledore will go to win, and who he's willing to sacrifice. She should remember that part, because in canon it wasn't just Severus who was sacrificed.
excessivelyperky chapter 50 . 7/10
Well, that was unexpected! (not surprised that two Gryffindors are Head Girl and Head Boy, surprised Albus didn't write that into the Hogwarts Charter).

It was good of James and Sirius to help, I thought they would save Lily, but conjure up some popcorn when it looked like Snape is in trouble.

And I thought Slytherins were cunning, seriously, none of them have yet to offer Snape any kind of bribe...
excessivelyperky chapter 49 . 7/8
Actually, Tom Riddle could take Polyjuice and go in as Albus to fetch the Prophecy, but alas he's not doing anything so sensible.

Oh, I think I know what Eileen's problem is. I bet Severus has grown to resemble his father, and certain habits are very hard to shake when one has been abused long enough. I think she feared he'd grow up to be just like his father. But I am very surprised that Sev hasn't thought of at least *some* kinds of behavior he'd like to indulge in.

Too bad Lily and Sev can't shop by owl-order, or have someone else go in for their books and supplies. But of course that would be sensible, too.
excessivelyperky chapter 48 . 7/5
I'm surprised the stone was cracked-I keep being told that a Hallows can't be destroyed or hurt. But Fiendfyre is pretty powerful stuff. I bet that Albus tries it out anyway when he's in private

And I don't know what Lily's parents are thinking to let them sleep in the same room at their age, frankly.
Sofia chapter 102 . 7/2
I enjoyed your book very much :)
excessivelyperky chapter 47 . 7/2
Boy, it's a good thing that Severus was there and stopped Dumbledore from offing himself-younger Severus would not be able to stop that curse, and the Headmaster would die much more quickly.

Would that be enough for a Life Debt?

Or are Life Debts only owed to other Gryffindors?

But I'm glad that ring is about to be destroyed (the Stone itself should be all right, and then Albus can listen to the voices all he wants to then).
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