illegible, I can't read

Again code error

While this may be an interesting idea, you need to slow things down a bit. The pacing felt rushed, try to flesh-out the story a bit. It might be good to have a sibling or a close friend to proof-read for you, as there are some spelling mistakes, and sentences missing words.
I hope you can continue to write and improve along the way.
Stay safe and eat tacos

ok so it's blue exorcist meets howling commandos