OMGG SO GOOD!

Short story but is very well written (shows how couples can come together).
Baa-Chan is very smart making a mission for the two of them to be together.

Beautiful. I loved it. Affection is very intimate and precious. I'm happy to see Naruto experience it.

A sweet little fluff story, with lots of sugary overload! Just what was called for! I could see the super (over)confident Naruto turning shy and nervous at actually dating Hinata, as he's had no real role models or training in how to handle real interpersonal relationships, other than somewhat as just friends; and even then, he's loud, brash, in your face, and highly oblivious to many social cues and norms. And then to receive true, unforced, freely-given affection, would be a major event for him, and he wouldn't know how to handle it all without a bit of embarrassment and awkwardness.

A fun, sweet, cute, little read.

that was good keep the chapters coming

That was si damn cute! I loved it!

Love NaruHina fanfics!

that was good keep the chapters coming

Cute one-shot! I'm starting to run out of completed Hina fics to read. :(

Thanks for the Read,
~OneAznDragon

Awwww it's so cute. Couldn't help but smiling along the read

Simply adorbs! Adorable. I always imagined that once together they would be a very touchy-feely couple, from their earlier lack of affection. So, to me you nailed it. I loved this!
Great idea and story. Wish there was more.

I really like this fic, it's a great idea and the way the story plays out is so coy and adorable!

The only critique I have is the technical sode of your writing; you have quite a few spelling and grammatical errors that distract from your super cute story. If you have time to update, try reading the story back to yourself out loud. It'll help you scrutinise everything more thoroughly and catch those little errors throughout the story as well as give you a better idea of how the sentences flow together, where to add punctuation and that kind of thing. Or just try a beta!

Anyway the way the plot progresses is lovely and it's such a sweet idea, if you have the time & desire to make those little fixes I think it would really improve your story a lot, but yes this is a great story, so cute!

Lovely

Naruto and Hinata forever indeed.

Cute and sweet.