Reviews for My Story
MojoBlack chapter 7 . 7/9
Very very Original. Seriously
Mejial chapter 1 . 6/9
Trully one for the record books, down to how you rationalized it at the end. Say without a shadow a doubt, this is in the top 5 best Naruto and NaruHina Fanfiction I've ever read. It was hard to get past at the beginning but once the flow is on your in the tide till the end. I, who has been reading Naruto and Naruhina Fanfiction close to a decade now, takes my hat off and will bow in the street when you walk by today.
geoslim21 chapter 175 . 6/3
PAIN NOT PEIN. Pein was only used in crappy fan translations and the official translation is Pain. Pein is the literal translation of the characters that were used to spell the name Pe-i-n.
Kyuubi293 chapter 78 . 2/2
Wait Shino just said naruto in front of hinata is this a typo ?
mateususantosu chapter 6 . 1/8
well, I'm out. I thought he'd be anbu-like, silent, serious and stuff, oh well..
mateususantosu chapter 5 . 1/8
uh, isn't he supposed to be the silent type? he's the one who speaks the most... weird...
BoaresJJA chapter 13 . 12/28/2019
Too Happy, no actual time to develop the characters to a point of understanding them and they accept things like it's Fairy Tail or some shit like that.
dzkz.phoenix304 chapter 23 . 11/17/2019
For one I'm liking a series but the way you portrayed kiba being powerful was completely false not to mention you've already showed Naruto using other techniques I don't know why you keep making him use only Shadow clone jutsu
LB Cat chapter 227 . 11/9/2019
Thanks. It's a happy ending story. Like it.
Acidflame chapter 7 . 10/23/2019
This chapter is so wierd maaaaannn wtf.
Still enjoying this fic tho
Bright Inferno chapter 14 . 10/21/2019
I am loving the story so far. Although what happened here left me a little confused. I couldn’t understand why Garra was interested in Sasuke and didn’t care about Naruto in this case. In the show, it was because Naruto didn’t really do anything except shout at them. Here however, Naruto not only drop Konahamaru, but also deduce Kankuros abilities. Here, Sasuke didn’t even do anything beside sit on a tree, only to be revealed by Naruto. I get you don’t want to go too far with Naruto by making him extremely powerful or being friends with everyone, but this just genuinely made no sense to me. Still, great work on the fic. Can’t wait to read more
Guest chapter 227 . 10/12/2019
Fuck you dude, now I’m listening to that song constantly
Min-chan17 chapter 41 . 8/4/2019
This one remember me of ed sheeran songs, he probably read this "if you cross her... you cross me"
RisingPluto66 BKA chapter 220 . 8/1/2019
I love the story but did minato and kushina really did Say those things to their or they were just illusions or self doubts?
Guest chapter 220 . 8/1/2019
The story is good but why did you have Minato and Kushina insulted Naruto I know he did bad things but you didn’t have to go that far.
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