how is 163 the last chapter when archive four your own has 181 chapters

Ohh interesting concept

FUN STUFF .

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You seem to fall into this trap a lot where your bad guys seem to be able to overcome your goodguys when it makes no sence. You had too very well trained heros in civs (so giving them the surprise advantage too) vs 2 thugs that thought they where just grabbing a everyday person. How do they manage to get the better of them? There respected mentors might break them for it.

Absolutely love this version of Sara!

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Good chapter, and great job with the ending. What changed your mind about writing 164 chapters instead of 163 chapters ? Also, I had thought you'd end this with a lemon. I suppose the Black Siren/Sara/Laurel one was the last one you intended to do. Oh well.

How does Rose physically stepping away from Slade show respect to him ?

Speaking of Slade, I see you added a third part from S5, which is Slade searching for his sons.

I personally don't think he and Sara will ever become enemies again. He was under the Mirakuru's influence and now it's gone from him. Either way, I hope he'll be able to mend the bridges with his family.

Good to know that Blackfire Sr.'s gone for good and thanks for revealing what deal Alia made with Death.

Sara definitely had the help of all f her loved ones in defeating Trigon and Blackfire Sr.

And so the end shows that Team Arrow will still have stuff to deal with.

Out of curiosity, where's Artemis at the moment ?

Oh, and will is Shado completely cured now that Blackfire Sr. is gone ? Either way, I also hope that life smiles kindly upon her.

Thanks very much for writing this fic. You've done and excellent job and it was fun and entertaining to read. I've enjoyed it sense the beginning and good blessings on future projects. And also you're welcome for the comments, follows, and views.

If I may, maybe you could write a harem fic for Fitz from "Agents Of Shield". I'm just the kind of person who likes the younger, and especially nerdy, guy with multiple gorgeous women. Plus he deserves some loving after all of the bad things he's gone through on the series.

In regards to that plagerist, even though it's good news that 7 of his accounts are banned, can't he or anyone else continue to create new accounts with new names ? From what I understand, a person can always create a huge sleuth of differrent accounts ith so many differrent names and without limit. I wish you the best though in regards to resloving that whole problem regarding him.

Have a very good day.

Wait it’s over over ? Noooo I want more ! :(

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And the great adventure comes to an end. Well done!

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Great chapter, great action, and excellent job writing the final battle. What was different however with this battle than with the original battle that allowed Trigon to win, besides Sara, Thea, Cass, and Felicity, and possibly Artemis being dead ? Why didn't Rose try and use the spear within that other timeline ?

It's great to see that all of the heroes and antiheroes you introduced within this fic were art of the final battle. The only ones missing were Nyssa, Helena, and Barbara. Oh well.

And I see you've borrowed a third part from season 5: the island exploding. All of this definitely took things full circle, both in regards to everything starting on the island and also the Lance family's conflict with the Blackfire family.

Now that Blackfire Sr's been defeated, what happens now with his son Mathias, and is Central City of Earth 2 free now that Zoom and Arkham Knight are out of the picture ? Are Mia, Jesse, and their friends able to return home ?

Also, is Trigon completely powerless now since all of his powers were absorbed by Blackfire Sr. ? I didn't expect the betrayal but shouldn't't be too surprised.

It looks like Slade is better than the Arkham Knight, unless he only defeated the latter because the former had help.

How are the heroes and antiheroes mentally alright and able to use their motor functions after Blackfire Sr. ripped out portions of their souls and minds ?

Is Trigon, Blackfire Sr., and their minions who're also dragged into the portals gone for good ? I personally hope so.

And so Sara faced her greatest challenge ever and won. Come to think of it, I think a good addition would've also been for, when Sara dies near the final battle, or dies again at this moment, we get a cameo for Oliver, who speaks with Sara in the afterlife and absolves her of her guilt and encourages her to keep fighting, like when Clark saw Jonathan during his battle with Brainiac Prime.

Aren't there two chapters left ?

I read the latest message on your profile page and were you saying that the plagerist has help from someone else and that the plagerist would've been stopped if it wasn't for that other guy ?

Have a very good day.

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