Reviews for Azula's Spider
Markus-Antonius chapter 14 . 8/8
I have already seen your replies to similar reviews like mine, I like your Azula, but I’m not decided on your Peter. He seems pretty immature for a guy who has been fighting in the fire nation army that razes villages on occasion. I get it he’s 15 or so, so hormones and stuff, but cmon you can dial back some of this stuff a bit right?
Markus-Antonius chapter 11 . 8/8
Why does he act like he’s stupid? He’s been tricked three times by Black Cat, says things that sound retarded? I mean the earth bending momo was like amusing so one second, but dragging out the bit just makes him sound dumb. Plus he’s in a ruthless army. You’d think he’s seen some crazy stuff and mature a bit
Spidey's1437 chapter 14 . 8/3
I don't know what to say since I've never even read or watched Avatar the Last Airbender, heck I didn't even hear about it before reading the story. So I guess I don't really know what to expect. I'm not familiar with the characters either so it's all new to me. Though I did notice that the spiderman in the story is very different from your other stories. He kinda seems like a weakling, childish, whines a lot and certainly more thick, is it just cuz of he's age or he's supposed to be like this? Hope things get interesting soo enough.
Betillo chapter 14 . 7/28
Absolutely love this
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 6 . 7/24
Nice work!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 7/23
Ooh boy...a prank is gonna he set up by both Azula and Peter? Joy!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 7/23
Pretty good start. Although with all due respect, it’s hard to pronounce Peter’s name without saying the word (pedo) as in pedophile. So if it’s okay, may I just continue to read his name as Peter? I’m more comfortable that way...

Also, I’m sorry if I was offensive just now.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/12
Can blackcat and azula with piteo be a couple?
Hivedragon chapter 14 . 7/8
Its so much fun seeing Azula being so protective of Piteo and I just love Han and Khan, there such great oc's that I wished they were in the show.
NullSilver2005 chapter 12 . 6/29
I have to ask. Will you be adding Deadpool?
NullSilver2005 chapter 13 . 6/29
I am loving your story and hope it gets even better.

And I can see piteo with both Azula and Feilihsiya. And that seems like enough for our dear spider man.
Death Fury chapter 14 . 6/28
excellent chapter
I craft experiences chapter 14 . 6/27
Two questions:
How do you write such interesting dialogue that feels natural and yet engaging without being illogical?

Do you always write harem-based romance fanfics?
Guest chapter 14 . 6/27
I love Avatar and Legend of Korra as much as the next guy, and who doesn’t love Mortal Kombat either, but how about working on your other big yet underdeveloped stories for a change?
Like “Phoenix of the Web”, “War World”, “Family to the End”, “A Web of Ice”, “The Spider, the Cat, and the City”, etc?
Stormhound12 chapter 13 . 6/26
Bemused means confused or bewildered. I'm not sure if you realised that it does not mean amused because when I read it in the sentence, the context could go either way.
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