Amazing man, keep it up! But the potrayal of Poseidon was a bit outta character

So good to read couldn't stop need more keep going with this it's great

Wow update

love the chapter and love the power percy has.

Another great job!

Chain Artemis in Tartarus, and let get raped dayly as punishment.
I call it ironic

I suppose this is the same Artemis, who if I remembered correctly, had said that if killing demigods who'd done them a great service was Olympian justice, then she would have none of it? And yet she has no qualms with killing a defenceless woman?

Fail. Epic fail. While Riordian's own depiction of the Gods painted them as extremely flawed beings, at least, unlike your fic, he never degraded them to the level of one-dimensional villainous caricatures. Then again, I suppose the PJO fandom has always suffered from excessive bashing and a lack of common sense.

keep going cant wait to see where this story goes

Nooo!
No kill me to get more powerfull thing!
Nyx shall live! Oh wait! Maybe just a blessing and nothing too drastic!
However. Jo! Awesome! I love it! You are one of those writers that have a tallent for it. 90% of all fanfics have bad gramar or lots of misspells (?). But yours doesnt its really cool. When i read other fics i think yes, ok, hmm, yea. But when i read this story i just constantly have a smile on my face and enjoy reading it.
Also! I think once a week is a good update rate (?) for chapter of that lenght. As long as you realy update once a week.
By the way.I like how there is no cliche "the gods betrayed percy" , "caught annabeth cheating on him and got mad" or "the new son of poseidon that gets all atention and no one gives a shit about percy" kinda thing, but he found out about their wrongs, tried to make annabeth see her mistake. And you dont know much detail or anything speciffic about it. I realy like that somehow.
(I kinda loose myself writing reviews and stuff like that. Also sorry for bad english. Its not my first language. So yea...)

*yawn* 0:06 am in germany right now. Tiered as ****. Well! I guess I'll have to wait till tomorow to start reading this story. But so far it seems pretty dope. Good work dude/t (?). Keep it up. Cant wait to read the first chapter.
*giggles*

Am I drunk?

Not bad story, continue please and update.

So exiting can't want for the next chapter

Wow, just wow.

Love it, absolutely love how this story is going continue please!

This is such an interesting and amazing story story's f art keep it up plz.