... you had him make those for his hidden persona to use... then went and made everyone and their grandma know that he made them.
not very hidden is it? the second his alias uses the weapon, everyone will know who he is.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

First let me say that I'm having a great time. Second, I've been doing the calculations and Hetero is and isn't Cang Long. Like there's so much evidence for and against that I cannot understand what's going on with that plot point.

Other than my overwhelming confusion about the Identity of Cang Long this is top tier.

I like this fic so far, but there may be a few too many references to other series for my tastes at this point. Hope you toned that down going forward.
Here to read a RWBY fic not a crossover with Fate.

I really hope that the real Hei Long doesn't get credit for all of this...

I really hope that the Party Function doesn't play a role... if it does, I'm out.

I'm guessing you were high af this chapter. Cuz it made little sense, I have no idea what it was about. Smoke up!

Troll

Don't kill anyone in a gamer fiction. Have you ever played a video game? They're about killing and a tiny bit of plot/dialog. For good reason they don't let long winded chaps like you make games. If I was playing your game I would've killed Adam Taurus about 1k times(After I found his respawn). Your talent seems to be writing romance or drama for girls.

You need to fire your beta odflou. He is the worst beta I've ever seen. Odflou doesn't know English from his asshole. Thanks!:)

I hope that Jaune uses GoB or Enkidu on the spar with Claire. If not then I'll keep waiting!

That was AWESOME. I just binged the whole thing in a single sitting! Though, if I had to say one bad thing about this it'd that it doesn't seem like I am reading a fanfiction. The reasoning for this is below if you are curious.

It got a bit ranty, so TL;DR- it doesn't have any real basis on the source material at this point. It's got too many Fate elements in it. It's clearly a crossover. You should make original works.

You should look into making original stuff instead of such loosely based fanfics that seem to have almost nk resemblance to the original source material. Also, this is totally a crossover fic. A few references I could understand if you don't label it as such. But the sheer amount of Fate elements I've seen is staggering. It's got so much Nasu in here, that it just screams crossover. It's a bit irritating as I personally don't like Emiya's ideals. Why choose one life over another? Just save as many as you can, you'll still be a Hero. Just not a perfect ideal that can't actually exist. There is a reason I don't enjoy the Nasuverse as much as I want to. The characters give me headaches, with their silly reasonings that seem to go against common sense. Arturia is a prime example. I mean, what does she think would happen if she wished to change the past? It would clearly ruin the current future, technically killing everyone by making them not exist as they currently are or even at all. Ugh. Now I am all frustrated again. I'm going to do something to work off my steam...

...Nope.

Seriously? Another OC that'll play a big part? You should probably cut back on them. I can understand not being able to fit another character from RWBY as a "stepping stone" or someone to show his powerlessness for Jaune, but I don't understand a few of your choices. Like what's with this Akira bodyguard? Also, calling it right now. You are going to put in some other "gamer" character as an antagonist. I can feel it in my bones. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if that snake faunus is just that other OC I complained about last time Hetero something in disguise. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if he turns out to be a gamer-type antagonist who is using a similar disguise as Jaune's "Hei". I wouldn't be surprised, but I'll be disappointed. It just seems like a low hanging fruit to grab and squeeze.

In the end, I hope none of the above comes true. Even if this fic gets a bunch of other weird stuff like it, I like it enough to continue reading anyways. It's probably the best RWBY/Gamer fic I've read even with all the weird OC's. Thanks for writing this, it's very entertaining.

I love this so far, but having an OC like "Hetero" play such a big part isn't really sitting well with me. I mean that "Cindy" is obviously Cinder. Also, Cinder adopting someone? The world would burn before that. That's like saying Salem falling in love with Ruby. It would simply never happen. Other than that, the fic is great. I look forward to reading the rest.