Reviews for The Succubi Protector |
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Kinga Kakashi WangChuk chapter 1 . 5/14 You wrote that Ageha suck off man and she went around club and she kiss Naruto. |
Gible chapter 4 . 7/28/2019 Why isn't there a fanfiction where Rias ends up marrying Riser because I'm tired of her getting what she wants. It's pretty obvious that no one has ever told her no before. |
bossrocket75 chapter 1 . 3/6/2019 good |
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 He's so fucking weak and he let himself be order around like a little bitch |
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 This shit is just trash |
benjamin chapter 18 . 1/9/2019 excelente trama de la historia y la colision de personajes de diferntes mundos la hace increible continua esta grandiosa historia. |
darkrage2001 chapter 18 . 11/12/2018 Good story |
FanFicFreak6669 chapter 8 . 10/28/2018 You realize you had Naruto address Asia by her name, before she'd even given it, right? Same goes for Kurumu and the Priest. Might wanna fix that. |
Sharkboybeast chapter 13 . 1/17/2018 I like your story but not even a death god can negate DNA especially if that god wouldn't stand a chance against a full blooded titan and this is me use your titan hype against you other than that wonderful story |
Kael Sunstrider chapter 13 . 12/25/2017 Wait. Tsunami? Saeko? Did you stole the lemon from another fanfic? |
Guest chapter 18 . 12/20/2017 Quite a few spelling errors but nice chapter |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 Delete this bullshit |
Guest chapter 18 . 12/19/2017 Been awhile since I read this...was the grammar always this sloppy? |
Guest chapter 18 . 12/19/2017 man this morrigan bitch needs to be broken by Naruto. |
Sovereign49 chapter 18 . 12/20/2017 Overall I really like the plot of this story. But it seems to me like the alliances of the succubi only bring them the negatives of an alliance without any positives. Sorry to be blunt but your spelling and grammar sucks. You even get names in 10 different ways and it often seems like autocorrect on your mobile screws with your texts. Cheers |