Reviews for White Sheep
RunOnSentences chapter 9 . 1h
Dude HOW ARE YOU THIS GOOD!? This is incredible.
Argentokai chapter 48 . 7/23
Lol people are mad because of Jaune x Yang.
So many shippers are so immature.
Guest chapter 104 . 7/13
Nonsense, this was an amazing story
soren82002 chapter 34 . 7/11
It just keeps getting worse and worse slash better and better.
soren82002 chapter 21 . 7/10
This is still great. Salem's part is amazing.
soren82002 chapter 11 . 7/10
Getting worse and worse for Jaune, lol.
soren82002 chapter 6 . 7/10
Salem's thought process
Jaune enrolled in Beacon: PANIK

Jaune is diguised: kalm

Jaune is being hunted as a criminal: PANIK
soren82002 chapter 3 . 7/10
God damn, this is a train wreck already. I love it.
jetjedi chapter 25 . 6/30
Fav
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 88 . 6/25
From all your stories that I read, I believe this story handled the teams the best. Team Ribbon was one of the best teams ever as it brought life to all the characters. Team whirlpool was not slacking either. By splitting up Ren and Nora but keeping them on the same team brought new interactions with their partners. Blake is quite like Ren but Nora could get reactions and how it slowly spirals out of control when Blake dosent know what to do with it. While Nora has to do all the reactioning with Ren.
Yang and Ren were a good team duo aswell, and while I dont remember much about them its fine. Ren alone just standing out is fine. The fact that Yang's sister is with Jaune and the 3 of them being friends bring them close.

I think this is a story where Phyraa talked the most. Even if she didnt say much, her prescence was always there. The love traingle? quartet? Or How many it turned out to be in the end, also allowed Phyraa to play a role in the background. Yes she didnt want to cause any discourse with Ruby and so she didnt admit her feelings, but we could still see her reactions.

When Phyraa and Jaune finally had the talk about the maiden, It was the first time Phyraa had such a moment so focused on her, compared to the rest and I loved it, Jaune's response was good too (despite is intentions and all).

Honeslty i feel this story bond relationship between the students was done the best. Heck I loved the Jaune and Cinder Sister and brother moments when she snuck into becaon and was a student. It was so cute. And then we learn when Phyraa is captured and talks to Salem how Cinder used to dress in a Bewolf costume when she was younger and play with Jaune is SOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEEEEE.

I feel like it sprialled a bit out of control with the fall of beacon. I slowly lost interest after that, but I loved what you were able to create before all that happened.

This story rlly made it feel like Whirlpool and Ribbon, while each had a personality and a role , also was part of one big disfunctional yet beautiful family, and I loved it. When I recall this story I recall how amazing Team Ribbon was put together. I also recall how amazing Cinder being an elder sister to Jaune also was.

Thank you
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 86 . 6/25
I want to say that this story kind of lost me

I loved the begining. I loved the bonds the team had the dynamics they had. the bonding between cinder and Jaune aswell. And Salem swooning in the background. I loved team ribbon because it was put together splendidly. Ren was nice he talks so much its interesting. Honestly it was all fun.

I feel like things started to fall towards the dance, stakes got too high, espcially with the fall of becaon and them going on an adventure. Idk im not so into it anymore. All the different factions fighting in Haven was funny but idk im not into it as much.
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 81 . 6/25
I skipped some parts because I was only rlly interested in the Salem Phyraa scenes. Mostly skipped Weiss's parts and beginng of blakes part.

Kind of regret it with how fucked up this became
its hilarious
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 68 . 6/25
The story confuses me it feels like its building up itself to be serious but then it just goes full comedy

like comon serious characters in a funny plot? and then sometimes theres rlly serious moments but then it all disspears
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 57 . 6/25
Love how pleased Cardin and Yangs team where to not fight Phyraa and her reaction
Guest dude chapter 10 . 6/24
Is there a reaction fix to this someone please tell me
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