Reviews for Long Night |
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Guest chapter 6 . 5/17 Aaawwwwwwwww... Great chapter! |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/17 Aaaawwwwww...how dare you break your promise Marcus! He never wanted this life! aAaAAAAaaaaaaAaaAAAAAAHHhHHHHHhHHhHhHhHHHh!,!'! Oop |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17 ...uuummm... |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/16 Omg! Aawww... but, when buster called him and told him Johnny was shot, he forgot to say that he was also stabbed... AAaAAHHHHHHHhHHhH! Great chapter! |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/16 Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Great chapter! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16 ...NoOOoOoOoOoOoOoOO! Aaaawww... I loved the first chapter! Great job! |
Malchus-Fireheart chapter 6 . 10/15/2019 Good story but I hate how it ended up.(no offence) Nearly every story has the bears as the villains.(including this one) They were 100% in the right in the film. They were the victims. Mike STOLE from them. So while the story was well written I say. **** Big Daddy and **** Mike as well. |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/16/2017 Ash your in the world did you get that thing |
Kevin chapter 1 . 12/16/2017 Johnny you got to get out of there and fast |
PinkStarLover000 chapter 7 . 7/29/2017 Oh my gosh! Love your story so much! |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/29/2017 I wouldn't mind to know what happened :D |
Sunnyflight170 chapter 3 . 4/8/2017 I know he's a criminal, but johnny's dad isn't really that bad. it was like in the movie, except now, instead of breaking down the wall so he can go talk to johnny after he sang, i can see him saying to the guards in a perfectly normal tone, "My son's in the hospital. I'm going to see him." *blink* "bye." after that, he willingly would head back to jail. maybe. he might go after the bears... but if he didn't go after them, he'd probably go back to jail peacefully. |
FatedtobeRandom chapter 7 . 2/8/2017 Awesome story, looking forward to your sequel! |
Animation Universe 2005 chapter 7 . 1/31/2017 That's the end? Looking forward to the sequel! Nice cliffhanger! -AniUniverse '05 |
JunjouRomanticafortheWinxoxo chapter 7 . 1/31/2017 What?! Seriously? I feel like this chapter was so rushed. I wish we got to see more visits from the other contestants checking on Johnny. And how did Lance come into this story? So random. |