Reviews for Team Seven Again
blue boy heartless chapter 3 . 10/25/2017
That's was really awesome... and I really like that you not following the mags or the anime when it comes to the story hell you even went as far as to change the characters ...please continue ur hard work and I really hope that u update this story soon and see if to the end it would be a shame to leave the story incomplete... in the mean time can someone recommend similar stories to me
Krapo chapter 3 . 3/5/2017
great action scene! I like your Shina and I smell something about Satsuki... I think next chapter with the begining of their genin mission will be fun.
Krapo chapter 2 . 3/3/2017
I didn't expect Naruto to be smoking, but the cigarette incident was very fun! When I read first that he was smoking, I was thinking how is it possible? Sakura would have beat him to death for that and after when he prefered to gulp his cigarette than to be caught... it was great!
Krapo chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
Hmm, you've put shina in a team with two girls... I wonder what Satsuki think of shina
samuraipanda85 chapter 3 . 1/23/2017
You've got me hooked. This is a nice little story, nothing too epic or grab me by the balls and take me for a ride, but that isn't a bad thing. I will enjoy seeing where you take this story, hopefully not a cut and dry retelling of the original manga. Throw in some flare, a new enemy, new obstacles to overcome. Have the minor shinobi nations rise up in protest against the larger Shinobi Alliance.
samuraipanda85 chapter 2 . 1/23/2017
I'm loving these interactions. All of them are on point.
samuraipanda85 chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
Interesting. I wish I knew who was relater to who though. I'm guessing Sasuke and Karin. Hinata and Kiba. Shikamaru and Temari. Ino and Sai. Etc.
Czar Joseph chapter 1 . 1/21/2017
This is an interesting story. I'm impressed.
Dieinhappiness chapter 3 . 1/20/2017
I love the chapter
RedVoidWriting chapter 2 . 1/15/2017
By the time I read the 15th sentence I realized this chapter was not off to a good start. Nothing really seemed meaningful or interesting, they were saying a lot without getting anywhere. The hand sign to signal a meeting seemed a little out of place as well. The ninja dispersal was anti-climactic.

Things lightened up when you introduced the old and wise Hokage who had wisdom and experience to impart to his son and Konohamaru. He and his son do not have too interesting of a relationship and their reactions seemed forced but the writing style and Sakura's unique parenting style gave some much needed life to the story.

Overall, when this story began it was brimming with potential, don't let that potential go to waste. 7.8/10
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2017
It's a bit slow, but seeing as it's build up for the genin test next chapter (hopefully) it's understandable. I hope we get to see it soon :)
Yondaime7 chapter 1 . 1/12/2017
love the plot
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
Cool! Id love to see naruto as hokage!
The3vilFighter chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
Tbh i would've liked the Uchiha kid being a Boy but who knows maybe Karin and Sasuke, im assuming since Red hair have a little boy aswell, idk, but overall nice story, good job!
RedVoidWriting chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
The fact that you created a bunch of original characters and then splayed them in a manner that was largely introductory (though less so than I imagined) raised my guard. But your flowing writing style and generosity with references quickly won me over.

I'm hard-pressed to criticize since it seems you had this entire world thought out a good three days before you even put finger-to-keyboard.

Rating (thus far) 8.8/10

This is the highest score I have ever given a Naruto fanfic but be sure to correct the word fulfill in the 21th verse.