(Curses) man, two chapters ago, I was really hoping you plan on overcoming your hiatus. Now? I truly hunger for the storyline you’ve developed. The moving parts, the continuity of your plot devices and the foundation you’ve build piece by artistic piece... geez.

Again, I really look forward to reading more.

The ‘from the west’ bit always feels like an overselling point. Still, the exotic nature of the spears definitely played that angle well. Not that I see the bit panning out, but it speaks to the lengths these ‘dark sages’ are going too.

Weather similar or rivaling roles, I see them being a page turning force in this story.

There is one question I’ve got to ask, for learning sake: How fares the link between the fox and Mikon? Then again, that relationship is probably the biggest and longest standing mystery this story has to offer.

Gonna be watching for quite some time.

Oh my... By the measures Sarutobi’s taking, It sounds like intel Christmas came early. A mobilization the likes of which this reader has never seen of this fanbase. (Setups and frameworks not withstanding).

These are truly “all the stops”

Great job please continue the story

Is this a single pairing because if it is change the pairing from hinata to ino!

It was good, but lots of mistakes like using read instead of ready, a Naruto's forearm, unnecessary use of Kurenai and your author note is using Kurenai instead of Kurogin, most likely because you spelled it wrong and it went with Kurenai in spell checking.

I recommend ginger it takes more time to proof read, but lets you spot stupid mistakes that make you feel like hitting your head on the wall.

Also why did Jiraiya take Mikon along with him, if he knew what was going to happen why bring someone that he needs to protect she would have been alright if Jiraiya was only going be gone for a short while.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

I want ino and naruto back together!

Loved the Naruto and Hinata parts and Hinata's dream was great, but 17 years old body. Even if it was a dream Hinata wouldn't have been able to censored her dream to have grown up Naruto. You know if person that kind of dream they usually appear how they are in real life along with anyone they know in real life.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Good, still unsure about the group though they do seem cool, but the way Mikon was mentioned to not have the powers of the sage, but the blood of one is curious. I am assuming that it is the sage of six paths, since his is the only sage whose powers would be inherited as normal sage mode needs you to train. Put if she didn't have any power of the sage it makes why they are going after her even harder to figure out. Wouldn't some of the sages blood and inherited his powers be better. Though Minato would also be possible since he was sage, if she is related to Naruto.

Though the mention of her not being entirely human, is most likely a hint to her identity. Also for the organisation can you add all the titles and their meanings at some point.

When did Naruto reffer to Mikon as Miko-chan?

There were some typos, especially around he and she or her.

Loved seeing team 7 get beaten nothing was sweeter, but wish Naruto made the fight more even. I hope Kakashi stops Sasuke from getting over his head and mentions something that Naruto's goal was never to beat and makes Sasuke thing Naruto was holding back.

I do have one worry, though and that is how important to the plot will Mikon be at the moment her story as been more of a side story instead of the main, but by the looks of things they will intersect at some point. I'm going to take a guess that Naruto is really the one they are after or something, just feeling in plots were the plot or hidden plot focus on another character other then the MC it is usually does a plot twist where the MC was the true target or something happens to let them steal back the lead role.

Also how did they know it was a shadow clone and not a normal one, Kiba would have been too angry to notice it was solid and Sakura wouldn't be able to tell if the clone was just standing there.
Sasuke just wouldn't care.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

I forgot when did naruto see hinata naked?

It was a great chapter but I forgot what was that tri pronged kunai all about. I mean how he got it and all. Could u tell me?

Hey, it was nice, but I didn't understand the part about kyuubi in the last chapter

It was good, but I feel that Mikon is being too nosy into Naruto's business and her way of dealing with it is out of character it makes her seem smarter then she is/was shown. Not only that, but her involvement with Shino and Hinata just makes her seem Mary sue to me because, she comes out of no where and seems to suddenly know everything about what happend to Naruto recently.

Actually everyone is being to nosy in Naruto's business which is never good there's caring, but they also need to give Naruto his space. I want Naruto actually get mad and push them away a bit so they stop being so fussy. For someone like Naruto who is not used to people caring, getting involved with him too much at the start is only going to have negative affects on him. Yes Naruto is worried about the Kyuubi, but forcing it out of him and trying to fix it is only going make him close himself off more.

Also I was sure Mikon was the Kyuubi's body, and that they had known something like that since they didn't expect her in the first chapters. While I am slightly happy Jiraiya is back at the same time I am think it's to bloody late to act like a god father to him now. The more it shows that Jiraiya cares the more it seems to be fake, his actions speak louder then words and it feels more and more that he is only caring for Naruto because he feels it his duty not because he wants to. He says he cares, but then ends up leaving him behind again and again and I can't see any reason why even if it was for Mikon sake.

Not only that, but didn't Naruto move in with Jiraiya and Mikon why is back at the apartment which is less safe instead of the house Jiraiya and Mikon lived in.

And I think you are making Naruto weaker then you should, why I agree with Hinata being strong then she was made out to be, I don't like Naruto being shown that he is weak when he is not. Naruto said bottom 8, but if I include all his skills in a real fight Naruto would only be second to Sasuke. Heck with the Sharingan Naruto could overpower Sasuke as well. It seems that all the fights and areas they training don't show off Naruto's true potential. I want the damn seal on Naruto to max out and go away so Naruto gets a big boost that shocks everyone and makes him the top genin.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

hmmm...
i wondering how naruto will progressed since the beginning till now on.
but such develope and when naruto met strong opponent he will unbelievable strong too.
-.-
for this chapter...
i feel weird in negative way.
but can't figure out either just like you.
maybe, other reviewers knows betters..
maybe,,, just boring to read this chapter.

Can we not use SpEeCh pAtTeRnS next time? That actually hurt my eyes to read.

Hi there. I just you're entire story in one day. It's very good, very well done! I really liked it. I especially like Mikon and everything she has done for Naruto. I really hope everything goes well between the three, and that Naruto and Ino will reconcile. And that Naruto and Hinata will become closer and that he and Shino will be good friends. One question though. Now that Naruto is on a different team, will Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura ever become friends and comrades, despite their negative history? Or will they be bitter enemies with no hope of understanding each other forever? Just curious. I'm really looking forward to how this story turns out. I hope things won't be too bad later on. I hate it when good people suffer. Update soon