Really weird but in a good way

ok love the new look you gave Raven and that preview for at the end got me hypped up to see how END even manage to capture Salem. I wonder if END can demonfy the relics or warped them to work with the demons/madiens hybrids later. also wonder if Raven loses her bird form for another animal transformation.

Awesome chapter, I liked that little teaser at the end. Can't wait for the next one...

Great chapter

sob all this time salem already in control of END!?

what!?

Whoa...great chapter! I enjoyed it! By the way, did I see a KH3 reference here when Kyouka caught Raven’s blade and broke it? :-)

KO awesome chapter, looks like End is doing well with the victory of destroying Haven and the evil group getting ready to attack Atlas. But not all hope is lost for the fate of Remnant lies in Ruby and her group’s hands!

Ok got to emit that I forgotten about what END did when he f**k Raven but to use a spell to control her this whole time was genies. Got to say that now that they have the relic of knowledge they could either learn how to make both Grimm and demons immune to Ruby's silver eyes or to get who is and/or will be the next summer and winter maiden so they could get an ahead start. Really if used wisely they could learn how to steal the gods power. Now how they are going to use it is up in the air.

If you think you can slip that Skyrim reference by me then you're sadly mistaken. "Daughters of Coldharbor" What next, The Song of the Dragonborn?

To be honest, I came away with this chapter with a very "meh" feeling. Aside from the bad guys getting the relic, nothing of note really happened here. It was almost beat for beat canon (and seeing how bad V5s ending was in the first that's not the greatest thing but I digress).

It also felt like you kind of went out of your way to line things up with canon. It seemed a bit odd that Yang and Raven (who's brainwashing just seemed more of reason to put her in the harem than anything else) would talk since END was already there, and why didn't he just kill or capture Yang instead of grandstanding and boasting? Why tell the heroes to run from the bomb instead of detonating it with them still inside? And if END was around for the creation of Remnant why does he not know what the Relics do?

For a supposed "evil mastermind" he makes a lot of oddly questionable decisions.

Not gonna lie, except for the stuff with Sienna, the last several chapters were rather dull and boring. BUT- this chapter was rather cleverly written and incredibly enjoyable to read, plus the major deviation from canon was well appreciated. Well Done! Can't wait for the next volume for you to do, as your writing of this volume was WAY better than the actual show, and so I can't wait for you to write Volume 6.

Great chapter

PS. Salem is immortal. Literally immortal. While Ozpin can reincarnate with his memories, making him technically immortal, Salem literally can't die until Remnant is at true peace, and the gods are summoned. That's it. Maybe if u mess with her pool of darkness which is made out of the essence of the dark God (making her pretty much a demi God or even a mini God in her own right).

She is, in a way, like Deadpool. Cursed with immortality. Ur kinda underestimating this world, by alot. Rowan was an experienced fighter, fast enough to hit a bullet less than a second after it was shot. Neo is on his level, and was able to slowly win over Cinder before she brought out her powers. Then there's the Maidens, which can only be given to young girls (END can't take this power cuz he's not a girl) and was also originally from Ozpin, so Ozpin would know the powers best if he did somehow take them..

Rubies semblance is pure speed, but experienced huntsmen can easily beat her in speed several times over. Glynda has full on telekinesis, Pyrrha has magnetos powers, the robots firepower and lasers aren't something laugh about, and are only defeated cuz their not used smartly. And not to mention how fast everyone is. Narus and Fairy tail is full of awesome powers, even OP powers... But ur not gonna tell me that a handful of them can beat a whole world full of super powered people, who also happen to be as fast as Madara when they get some experience, and only get much stronger the older they are...

Ur making everyone.. A bit stupid. Rowan didn't survive this long by being hot headed. He never aims to kill, especially since it was a fight he wasn't gonna take seriously. And Neo is always able to get him out of a pickle if anything goes wrong (only reason he originally dies is cuz Neo had no way to get back to him).

Hell. Killing Rowan literally means ur gonna kill Neo, cuz she is willing to die for revenge of Rowans death (She fought Cinder of all people, knowing that it was a suicide mission. She only stopped when Cinder reminded her that it wasn't her fault, but Rubies).

Tho I'm probably just irratated u killed off one of the best characters in Rwby, just as a stepping stone, and didn't even present his suave personality well.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next one!