I'm late to this party but dropping a comment just to say that this is a wonderful story! really enjoying your writing and your writing style.

Wow, at the end of every chapter Im always at the edge! *squeals* You make a great thriller writer! Beside that, the stories could use more descriptions, adjectives, settings, personality, a bit more background on other characters(?). Still love your work! xoxo

That part at the end of chapter one was too cute. Omg. One he showed he learned something and two he was a smooth mf. I cant stop smiling. Oh no. Lol

aww

this has been such a ride. the epilogue though! himawari!

can toneri just, i don't know, vanish? disappear? go away?
the hyugas are annoying too damn it

yall i'm afraid of gaara

gaara though... lol

naruto and gaara being literal partner in crimes, yes that's what i deserve

Oh my gosh! This was amazing! Such a great story that keeps to the characters correctly. Thank you for letting us read this!

All the awwwwws for this chapter

This was truly truly lovely! and I'm so happy you accomplished finishing this! I love your writing and the way you always use words so effectively but at the same time they're so poetic! Ah I was planning to sleep but i had to read this first

My god naruto is such a wimp

This story was amazing! I acknowledged it in a few other reviews but I cannot stress enough how refreshing it was to read a story with drama where the characters reacted appropriately to it, where the couple would actually talk out their misunderstandings and feelings and with together. Thanks for such a fun adventure, and for giving us a bit of Himawari at the end!

so naruto got a little revenge on toneri by revealing to criminal, if they are in prison it was because their leader (aka toneri) sold them to police to avoid troubles.
but with the story over, at least, i hoped toneri crimes also being publicy revealed, with him arrested and sent in max security prison for life or maybe sentenced to death.