Mother fucker danzo...
You Extremely haters naruto

is this a naruto x ino?

This is boring as hell. This started out good, but before the story is half-way finished, Base Adult Naruto has taken out half of the Akatsuki in a month, can one shot S level ninja with the flick of a wrist, mastered all 5 elements, can just "nope" out of any fight via instant-transmission half way across the world to his Sky Fortress like Goku, can spam S ranked and SS ranked jutsu for days straight, is omnipresent via "super" clones, has sex with all the notable women via harem, brutally tortures for the thrill of it and has no problem with massacring people, who never did shit to him, to avoid capture? Oh, everybody got nerfed or is just flat out weak. Jiraiya also knows of his location, knows Naruto wants to take over the world and doesn't do anything?! Canon Jiraiya would storm his Emperor's Palace/Sky Fortress with all 5 Kage plus 10,000 shinobi backing him. Naruto isn't very smart. I don't care if he had a 1,000 years in actual time to prepare. He is no Illuminati Mastermind. No one can see a giant floating city in the air either, because Naruto can just make it invisible via seals with limitless chakra too? BULLSHIT. Just another Gary Stue bullshit story. I've had my doubts and worries for a few chapters now, but this confirmed it for me. This is just another "Edgelord Naruto becomes Emperor of the World with 100 wives and does whatever he wants, f*cks whoever he wants, tortures/kills whoever he wants and goes WHERE EVER he wants, BECAUSE HE F*CKING CAN, hE's ThE STroNgeSt!"...pfft... pleeease... I can just turn on the News Channel if I wanted to watch/read about an East African harem/Emperor/Warlord take his 20th wife by force and massacre 100,000 people. That's a good role model apparently. You're self insert is just another cookie-cutter Neanderthal man obsessed with power and sex. BooOOoOoRiiiiiiNG. Soon to be dinosaur.

Kusagakure Biju.

NarutoIt will damage the landscape and attract Iwa's attention"

Two BijuudamaWhat am I? A silent fart?!"

NarutoThere was no need to use the Rinnegan's abilities over everything. Besides, he has other various and powerful jutsus he could use.

NarutoBeing attacked with a jutsu for the first time in battle). Pulls sword out instead of using "various and powerful jutsu".

Also NarutoNot even 5 minutes into battle). Shinra Tensei.

Goddamnit! At this point of the story, I'm just slugging through this mess of a plot hole riddled, undecided-menstrually-PMSing-changing-mind-every-couple-of-paragraph Naruto that you created.

And I'm actually hoping for Naruto to just go and Shinra Tensei each and every village to dust and be done with it.

Even your Kurama has a very large sweatdrop and confused emoji on their forehead by this point.

I dont understand where Naruto's confidence is coming from when all the fights that he is in, he's getting tagged. I mean, yeah, god like blah blah, but damn! With his mentality and all the bravado and self confidence and shit he thinks of, you would think that at the very least he wouldnt allow this mere "humans" to even touch him. What's the point?

Your Onoki is so ooc. Onoki was well know for being a fence sitter. He waited for someone to make a move before deciding to side with the obvious winner. He never made actions. Ever. He was Onoki the famous fence sitter. Everyone knows that. Even Black Zetsu shouldn’t be able to influence him but even though you haven’t said it, it’s obvious you’re letting black zetsu get to him just to push the plot. It would have made more sense if A had been the one to push. ️

Really not gonna use a basic substitution jutsu to avoid a hit? Really?

I'll be honest I'm enjoying this story far more than the last two I read (A Mother's Knight & A God Amongst Men) but the whole multiple women thing you keep doing is messy and not like Naruto. It damages the story when you put unnecessary and unreasonable angst into the story as you have. Also as much as I like Mei you seem to overuse her in your stories as a romance when she doesn't fit. At least with Kurotsuchi there is reasoning and basis for it in calming things with the most violent nation, but Kiri is a side note, it has minimal involvement and little to no reason to attract his attention as you make it. And that's not even counting the age difference. I can understand making and breaking relationships, but you're just creating them out of nowhere, then throwing them aside when you feel like it like how Ino has been forgotten. It's just not Naruto, he may not have been in a relationship before but he's not an idiot who'd go around with any and every woman he feels like. This is honestly the only thing that keeps happening in your stories that in my opinion keeps them from being as good as they could be.

Awesome

I feel vindictive. Should make the clone for jiriya have penis after he removes the clothes. Watch jiriya get but raped hahaha

Honestly, this was very boring. -
sourapple

What happened to Zetsu. kabuto, or sai?

Alright. Now at this point. It seems omniSage finally has some clarity. I know this fanfic is already finished. But I hope his clarity stay longer and continuity issues end here.