Lovely piece. Your writing style was very fun to read and I enjoyed every word. Loved the twist if Byakuya only pretending to be drunk too. And the smut was nice and steamy too :)

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Lovely! I owe my friend for suggesting I should read this one. Thank you for sharing it.

Good Lordy! That was great! That is certainly getting saved!

Sweet mercy, this was gorgeous! I love this pairing so much that, plot or no plot, as long as they're together I'm happy.
Well-written, deliciously detailed. Marvelous.
Would love to see more if you felt like it.
And you say it's your first lemon? As a lemon connoisseur, I think you did a wonderful job, and I want 'bent over desk' and all kinds of naughty, nasty things from you now lol

Sounds realistic to me. I liked it!

Well, I liked it. I enjoy a little plot with my smut, personally. If I wanted lonely housewife who doesn't have enough money to pay the pizza guy, I wouldn't be here. It was drawn out enough, but not so overflowing with detail that I lost interest. And as a particularly blunt person, I'm not too big on purple prose. I have a hard time expecting poetry when the point you're trying to get across is penis-in-butt.

Overall, it was well-written, and I enjoyed it, so good job!

Whoa! It was pretty damn hot! Can't believe it's your first lemon!:-) It was good! I really mean it!:-) Bravo! **Thumb up**

I want there to be more of this. I want to see Byakuya bend Renji over the desk. I want to see Renji do Byakuya against a wall.

I want to see it all. It's good! I'd read it all if you added more chapters. I'd eat it right up!

Gooooood, it's gooooooood.

I also like how it's not all just sex (however awesome) and there's still that hint of plot.

I was too lazy (and too absorbed in reading) so I didn't search up all the Japanese terms, but I reckon it doesn't make much of a difference when I can just rely on inference skills.

Keep it coming! :)