Reviews for Halfling Justice
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19
This is a great story I can’t wait for the next update
YukinaBlueRose chapter 1 . 2/14
I am already in LOVE with this story! ! ! ! OXD
Scheffinator chapter 2 . 11/26/2019
Great story. Wondering if Danielle will truly make an appearance besides being mentioned.
sterredoesburg chapter 2 . 7/10/2019
Love it already.
The whole mysterious thing with Danny and that he just disappears when he gets scared, it's so cute!. Keep on writing plies!
And keep Danny the cute shy and scared little puppy!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/20/2019
Please update soon, plus please do Connor and Danny or just male and Danny in general.
UnknownRyder chapter 2 . 9/21/2018
Plz update! I'm so loving this!
Zak saturday 1 chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
Please update soon and when is Danny daughter/Clone going to make an appearance
LK2 chapter 2 . 2/20/2018
Really good so far thanks for the chapter and please keep up the good work (-)
nikkali44 chapter 2 . 8/8/2017
I really hope you keep writing, I can't wait to find out what exactly happened to Danny and how he was found by Black Canary and how he'll be on the team
ErisVodiax chapter 2 . 7/31/2017
I can understand the little-to-no variation thing because sometimes it's needed for a few chapters/episodes to get a grasp on the characters. Although, you should probably a a wee bit more variation on the team interactions, as there's an entirely new person slotted into the Young Justice universe who's probably goihgnto end up becoming one of the major players in the story. Also, unless you plan on doing an entire thing centered around his time before Black Canary, might I suggest little tidbits placed at the beginning of a chapter? That way they won't interfere with any cliffhangers, and you can interject a bit of fluff before the heavy stuff hits us right in the down under.
Zapster45 chapter 2 . 7/14/2017
update it
Scorpion97 chapter 2 . 7/10/2017
I love this story, however if you find yourself needing time to develop the next episode it wouldn't be a bad idea to cut them in half, after you've finished the episode you're working on. It'll give you time to work on the next chapter without feeling rushed.
Also, I really like the way you've changed Danny's powers, just be careful because he might turn really OP. With the addition of Danny I'm wondering if he might make a better leader than Kaldur, just a thought, but it is your story. Not because of his diversity in his powers, but because he has the most experience second to maybe Robin- depending on his age and the timeline changes made- however, I think unlike the boy wonder he would actually be able to sustain leadership skills due to his working with his best friend to teaching his sister the ropes almost by himself. Not to mention the fact that BC's psych talk that he's been hearing from Jazz for years would give him and insight into the others.
Don't worry too much about people's comments about how you've barely changed anything, you're only 3 episodes in.
Love the story, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see another chapter.
Ps, if it'd be easier I have 90% of S1 finished, I could give you my "blank"- unchanged scripts that are basically just written in paragraph form- versions to help you along.
:)
HTTYDGuest chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
That was only ONE chapter?! I swear I read 4!
Nemo chapter 2 . 7/5/2017
Halfa, not halfling. Halflings are hobbits.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2017
Not bad! Just a word of advice: Danny is wayyyy overpowered in this fic. If you wanna add extra powers to be original, that's fine. You just have to make sure to lessen the impact his other powers have, or remove them entirely.

Otherwise, pretty good!
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