Great and lovely story so far. Just gotta voice a single thought I had.

Fire-Sky? I really wanna try and comment on this without being condescending but damn is it hard. But you could of gone for a more direct mixture of an element between Wind and Fire. Scorch would of been a start. But Fire-sky just... it's so sore to read.

Honestly, this is my literally only complaint I have, and it kinda gives testimony to how good the story otherwise is if someone, in this case me, has to aggressively nitpick to find any mistakes.

Nooo, you cant just end it like this, I'll be sad and please continue it

Now bring back Natsu

Beautiful story i love authors that finish their stories... I you could do more NaWen stories

Natsu não parar de me surpreender nem depois de morto

Meu amigo Natsu... Poderia me dizer que diabos é essa gema?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAhh Cap foi de8.000!

Vai Wendy!

Meu jesus! Mais um cap Tenso.

Esse prefácio foi demais!

I'll be frank.
Can you make the sequel please?
I want to know the continuation of Wendy's adventure .
Honestly your story is great.
The part of your story that i like is when Wendy can use both her own and natsu's magic.
And the fight scene with Laxus also epic.
Natsu's Sacrifice on Tenrou Island and Wendy's sadness also totally awesome.

I can't wait to read your next story.

Haven't read a decent Wendy story in a while. Kudos to you!

I know this is gonna sound harsh, but after finishing this story I have to say that overall, I’m disappointed. Not because your writing style was bad, but I think a lot of your choices as a writer were, honestly, not the best. For example, when you shut down the climax to give us two stories of flashback to explain a minor detail. That was probably the worst thing you could do. I’m not saying this to be rude but hoping you’ll take it with you and learn something from it. But you completely ruined the climax doing so, and I found myself skipping most of those two chapters in-between because I just didn’t care enough about it and I wanted to see the conclusion of the story. I know a good rule in storytelling is to show, not tell, but this is far from an absolute. Yes, it is the best thing in most cases. But when the choice is to insert two entire chapters *inside the climax* instead of just telling it in two lines? Go with the latter. But I think the best way to handle it would’ve been to just show us those chapters earlier in the narrative instead of shoehorning it in in *the climax*.

I think another major problem with this story is how you handled Wendy’s character growth. I’m fine with characters not always fitting the shoes of the original; in fact that’s what should happen, otherwise they aren’t developing which means the story becomes boring to read. But you pretty much 180’d Wendy’s entire personality in a way that just doesn’t fit her. And we know that it doesn’t fit her because she’s delt with loss before, where she turned to the comfort of a complete stranger just to deal with her pain. But in this? She completely shuts off and becomes this super edgy and brooding character that only belongs in the story of a 12 year olds sonic the hedgehog fanfic. You do however return her to Wendy again at the end, which was nice. But that just means that it doesn’t feel like she’s changed as a person again.

Negative stuff aside, I think you did a great job with a lot of the other writing. You stayed true to the rest of the cast, and even I, with my cold, dead heart, felt very emotional when you described Natsu’s death. I think you did a really solid job on that. The rest is unfortunate, but mistakes can be learned from.

As a last note, completely nitpicky, I think Sky-Fire dragon slayer sounds better than Fire-Sky dragon slager.

I hope you have a blessed day, and I’m sorry if this review was a bit of a downer. I wish you the best of luck with your future writing! :)

i love thisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

its over ?
nooooo

Nice one dude