This looks like it could have potential hope you continue

Continiou please

God Fucking Dammit you managed to turn this into a Jaune fic

hoooo yes great great

I've been looking forward to this

Iv been waiting for this. I am super excited to see where you go from here with the story. Im sure it will be amazing just like everything else

No hay problema te entendemos es mejor esperar y leer una buena historia que un trabajo todo revuelto y lleno de agujeros.
Google traductor:
No problem, we understand you, it is better to wait and read a good story than a job all mixed up and full of holes.

Oh man, I sure do love stumbling across a great story only to find that it hasn't been updated in a whileeeee. (sarcasm)

Ooh nice

In famous words: sometimes the world doesnt need a d hero it needs a monster

awesome

amazing

Jaune should have wrote his town name that was destroyed. It would have then served a warning to the faunus.

I’d die of laughter if blske winds up attracted to jaune it would make this asomely reminiscent of some of the funnier Black comadys.

Well I hope you keep up the amazing work and I love the carnage in this fanfic but it is realistic at the same time and was that Jaune’s semblance with the fire thing