Reviews for Just a Game
Dreamer-Sara chapter 6 . 4/28
If Linda was told where Chara’s father had been transferred, she’d probably turn white as she slips into that horrible memory. I like a lot of things about your Home story, namely that even though the PTA started out horrible you still allowed them to grow and change for better or worse. They weren’t static background cast the reader is just supposed to hate. They are real people who learned and grew to be better than they were before.

Except Paul, Meredith, and that old man creep. Thoese three are as bad as Frollo. I wouldn’t mind placing them in 50 of Custom Night. :3

I know you aren’t into Undertale anymore, but thank you for making Home and keeping your story up for people too read. I’ve seen a lot of people who gave up then deleted their work just because they no longer resonated with it. It sucks for those who do, look for it, then can’t find it.

I hope you are well and that your life is blessed. I am grateful to you and your work.
thepolicepig chapter 7 . 3/23
I just finished reading home and the update on the last chapter of JaG, and you written a very good story. I loved it the whole way through. And while I am sad that the story ends here, I completely understand why you stopped. Do what makes you happy(and maybe someone else in the Undertale fandom can finish the story instead idk).
stichisich chapter 7 . 3/12
It’s so nice to hear that you are doing better! Me and my sisters loved reading your story as it progressed! What fandom is your next story going to be focused on?
Winter Starcatcher chapter 7 . 3/11
Glad to hear you’re doing alright!
Periosha Seville Andrews chapter 7 . 3/11
Kinda sad to see that you've fallen out of Undertale, but that's totally understandable.

A shame to see this work unfinished, but you're a great writer, so I look forward to reading more of your work. Stay strong and keep up the fight. We're all rooting for you.
AlchemyWriter chapter 7 . 3/11
Glad to hear that you’re doing better. I’m a little sad that you won’t finish this story, but I understand. I actually saw a comic dub someone made from Home, and it made me want to reread it, so at least Home will keep the attention of readers for a long time.
seor bean chapter 6 . 2/3
don't beat yourself up for not being able to write more chapters! It's totally okay for you to need to take a break. Whatever you've been through, just know that everything gets better. Trust me. I've been struggling with mental health too. I can't wait for your return but I get that you need time. anyone who doesnt , doesn't deserve to even read your art. We're here for you 3
Cold chapter 6 . 12/14/2019
We're gonna rock down to, *electric avenue*, and then we'll take it higher!
SadSpade4679 chapter 6 . 11/30/2019
YOU CAN DO IT
sansinsmash chapter 6 . 11/14/2019
#sansinsmash #sansinsmash lol
FANFICgeek2018 chapter 6 . 8/28/2019
Okay, first off you dont let anuone down by takeing care of yourself. Second if you dont have motivation dont ush yourself too hard. Take a break and go eat ice cream or something that relaxes you. I hope sincerely that you feel better whether or not you write anything on here.
Bee-positive chapter 6 . 5/26/2019
Hey there! You didn’t let anyone down! I’m a bit of a writer too. I know sometimes a little break from writing (or even a really long one) is perfectly fine. ; )
#staypositiveforusokay
Multiverse101 chapter 6 . 3/9/2019
Hi. I’m a long time fan of Home. I read it originally a few years ago and stumbled across it again while browsing for some good Undertale fics. This is my first reading of JaG though and I can honestly say that I’ve enjoyed every single chapter so far. But… you’ve been gone for over a year now. I understand why, don’t get me wrong, but at this point, I’m unsure if you’ve forgotten about the story entirely. I don’t even know if you will ever read this. But if you do, just know that I will patiently await your return, no matter how long it takes, and I look forward to reading the next chapters, if/when they come out. Good luck with your mental health, I hope that you’ve gotten better over the past year, even if only by a little.

~Multi 3
Guest chapter 6 . 2/25/2019
I mean this stroy is great, and I can't wait for the next page, but ...
Well I'll be waiting patiently for your return.
Hang in there :)
Also will we be seeing more of mk, he and azzy are my two favorite charachters in undertale.
Wolfspirit2996 chapter 6 . 2/18/2019
Dude, it's fine! I know what it's like. Most of my stories on this site are on hold for personal reasons as well. Most of it is wanting to get physically healthy, but there is a small part that wants to be happier. Take your time, friend :)
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