Enjoying this story. Thank you for writing it.

Quiz answer: Telekinesis

I liked this and you are a good writer but there are some issues... The order of events following the abduction were hard to follow tbh... the back and forth before that was fine though... my biggest issue was the fact that Peter essentially chooses to leave alone a man who is mentally unwell, is in a position of power and who has access to a gun (all things Peter clearly acknowledges). Okay, Peter forgives him... cool... what about the other people this guy hurt and will continue to hurt on his 'side' jobs? Bills still need to be paid, right? What's Peter's responsibility towards these other people? There isn't closure that 1)this guy will never hurt someone again and 2) hasn't already given Peter's name away and 3) did or didn't cause the fire that almost killed a 5 year old...to be honest I ended up feeling like the adults should take charge of the situation, which I think was the opposite of what you were going for...
I did like the introduction of Brian, Jeff and daredevil though. Also peter at school with ned, mj and flash. That was done well. I Hope you keep writing.

A hulk plushy? Yes!

Haha Spiderman to hang on, nice image

, oh man.

AAAAAAAHH THIS IS SO AMAZINGGGG!
Seriously, AWESOME work on this story! I love how you gave it satisfying closure without killing the bad guy or anything. It’s also a really cool idea how you wrote it non-chronologically; I can see how that would really help with writers block, and I liked the way you fit stuff together like telling what actually happened during the torture while peter was watching the recordings.
One little thing I think you could’ve done better (if you don’t mind me saying) is making it more clear exactly when everything was happening; by the time he got out of medbay, I was pretty confused when exactly he got his suit back, when the scenes at school happened, when he started patrolling, how long it was before he went to the police station, etc; everything felt all over the place and I couldn’t figure out what had happened yet in certain conversations -but I guess that’s what the chronological version is for. I’ll just go read it! :)
Once again, amazing work!

Excellent story but one plot hole really bugs me. Cooper has weeks to pass on the information that he got from Peter. Even if the info on the Avengers compound isn’t correct, Peter did give him his name. The whole reason for the kidnapping and torture was to get info on Peter and the Avengers so surely he would have to assed that info on up to Fisk and his handler. Yes Cooper’s illness could have made him forget it but that’s a long reach. Thank you for the work put into this story and please keep writing.

The writing is superb thank you for the effort you are putting into this story

I might be that slow kid ... but this was hard for me to fallow. I know you said told in past present and future and even with that stated the moment I grasped the situation in my head it switched. maybe that was intentional and you wanted it that way.. I only made it to I guess ch. 11 with the way things were and I started over thinking I just missed something or whatever. but I couldn't fallow along. I went back followed all the respective pastnpresent and future up until ch 11 separately and ... like i said maybe I'm the slow kid.

that being said i enjoyed the present parts that I read the most. tuesday evening's just kinda threw me off and then you had tomorrow...and it was all too separate for me to even try and put together.

Still thinking about that last line. “I’ll always turn towards the light.” It really hit me hard. I think it’s been over a month but your story was so impactful you still got me thinking about it.

Love it!

Great story! You made me want to puke a few time with Peter too! I’m actually in the love with the order of the scenes. It really made the story amazing to read!

And the last line of this story! w o w ! I finished this story about 3 days ago and I cannot stop thinking about it. “I’ll always turn toward the light.” So good. I’m in love. I was at work and teared up thinking about that line and this story.

The forgiveness section of this story was so emotional to me. And I think you captured Peters essence. That’s what he would do. He would forgive. Very, very well done.

Anyways, good job on this story. It was so good!

Dear Evan Hansen!

BEAUTIFUL! That was absolutely gorgeous writing and I thank you for sharing it with us. It’s was practically perfect in every way imaginable. Well done, especially with that last reference to infinity war. Well played.

Okay. Man, there is so much to love hear. Usually, when I'm reading a story the switch of scenery and time tends to just make me annoyed because there's always one scene that is less interesting. Honestly, they are all equally fun to read. Watching May's reaction, the suspense of the fire, the kidnapping, the nurses. Mj's skepticism, stealing Happy's badge and watching the damn things. The entire time, the scene will change and I'm sucked back in. There are about three exciting things to wonder about at the same time and it's thrilling to piece them together.

The dialogue and thought process is totally, 100% Peter Parker and Spiderman style. Brilliant.

I love how you planted Jeff and Brian in the story. Totally insignificant strangers to us, yet I become immediately attached because they are so willing to help Peter. They don't bother with his identity, don't push his limits. God, there is so much.

And then, I tend to skim through author's notes briefly (rarely) but I'm getting a feeling you did not write this this year. Which makes this older story 10x more amazing. Only because now, I have a hunch that you have more up your sleeve.

Honestly, dude. Awesome plot, phenomenal dialogue, and I adore that the actual story is written from Peter's perspective. I get an idea just how disoriented and experience was, and honestly, incredibly human behaviors you portray. Yeah, Peter heals fast, but a patient who doesn't drink or sleep is gunna get sick. And I just love how you don't ignore that. God, I'm rambling.

Just, be aware I don't write a literal essay of love to a story without reason. This actually made my day.

OMG I just re-read your awesome story and re-realized how truly amazing it is! I just love your writing style and how you managed to wrap it all up. I haven't yet read "Where they go" because I still haven't seen Infinity War, but I look forward to reading it a soon as I've seen it :)