Reviews for Practice Makes Perfect
Guest chapter 14 . 9/19
Sucks this was abandoned
Guest chapter 14 . 8/6
Sexually deprived aren't you ? Lmao I can't believe I scanned thru this bullshit
mikethepokemaster chapter 9 . 7/7
man what happened to this man this was the shit. sad to see it abandon
Raizhan chapter 14 . 7/4
Damn ! At first I was "Meh a highschool fanfic not my favourite", then... from the last part of the chapter 2 to the current last chapter it was amazing. The lemon scenes are juicy !
A Petty Theif chapter 13 . 5/27
This is my mom...sadly...
raelarial1 chapter 14 . 3/23
makes me wonder how big his harem will get tbh, so far it seems to be an endless stream...I love it lol, and the 16 year old hanabi brings even more ideas and girls tbh, I would love to read some titfuck action but with girls with smaller chests too, all tits wether flat or big deserve some attention, i hope for more chapters
Azaleaelf chapter 14 . 11/20/2019
update pls
PrintedSnail11 chapter 14 . 9/26/2019
Found this idea really interesting, can't wait for more.
kynan99 chapter 6 . 9/18/2019
Thanks
Guest chapter 14 . 8/6/2019
I'd it continued I could see him having non sex involved get togethers to help the group mold together. Like a girls shopping trip with him along but not just the girls. Getting the moms together as chaperone, first with mebuki then likely hitomi as well even if they aren't having sex yet.

Even tentens mom even if he doesnt end up with her I could see them getting the moms together as friends. Tenten happy her mom has some good friends even friendship with some of the girls, plus is great cover when another mother helps them with her spending the weekend at their place so they can have sex and spend time together.

Even if her mom caught on after a while, with explanations about his mega Corp and his intentions with being with them all. Possibly a house husband taking care of them all and helping with kids and how he heavily focuses on their wants and pleasures I'm sure she could be swayed by her friends to help cover for her daughter and get over it. With her daughter being adult and having gotten to know them helping.

Hitomi comes off as a wow. Kurenai he is clearly after and the setup with anko is obvious. Considering her life in canon I always wish for her to be happy in fanfiction. Tsunade and shizune as well, so I'm happy anko was intended. Cant understand him neglecting temari, amari and them when they seemed to devote themselves, especially temari. With the way he has been it seems really out of character.

Well it doesn't matter I guess with the story over. This was a really good one too.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/6/2019
Also the pool party? Such a damned waste this was dropped.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/6/2019
Major waste leaving those 2 behind. Also cant understand temari with shika. She was clearly fully into him and with the care and affection shown during the 7-some she was really a wonderful girl. I don't see how he could let her go. She was open on her own wanting to share her happiness and pleasure with her best friends. Her suddenly not with him and with shikka instead just because is honestly just irritating. I expected her to be one of the main ones after the cheerleader bit and was wondering where the hell she's been.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/6/2019
Hinatas mom would definitely be a catch. I'd absolutely take group and find a way to marry them all. Even if unofficially.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/6/2019
It's really sad I'm about to run out of chapters and this seems to be dropped. What's new.. anyway I loathe ntr with a passion but despite that I'd still prefer he took mikoto away.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/6/2019
I'm shocked at no ayame and a bit at tsunade and shizune. Hell even anko. However with ayame I thought with his living arrangements and it finally not being a thing where she's the only civilian and thus ignored there was no chance she wouldn't be with him.
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