Reviews for Discovery
Charlie Jojo chapter 21 . 8/2
Phew what a time to pick up this story than good luck on basic training hope you do good there

With this established relationship with B-77 I can't help but wonder their reaction would be to finding Izuru is Hajime if he goes thur it that is.

The characterizations have been pretty good so far tho perhaps its my own interpretation of Gundam but his dialouge isn't confusing enough.

Idk if that makes sense but I remember in game I coukd barley translate Gundam speak without Hajime

Needs more peotry in his wording and SUDDEN EXPOLSION OF EMOTION WORTHY OF THE MASTER OF THE DARK DEVES OF DESTRUCTION...I guess

Anyways its been a blast reading this thanks for your time and effort making this

I would say enjoy BT but considering what I hear about it that probably won't happen as they break your spirit and remold you into a beautiful murdering butterfly

Ta-ta
TheGreatestSho chapter 21 . 7/29
I am very invested in this Fanfic by now..and I am interested on what Entails for Hajime in the Near or far future..keep up the goof work
TheGreatestSho chapter 20 . 7/29
I just hope the Lil Ultimates don't die like in Ultra Despair Girls
TheGreatestSho chapter 19 . 7/29
Very interesting... So either Hajime is gonna become an ultimate with a separate talent or he is not and it is just a consideration by Jin. or Hajime is gonna be named Ultimate Socializer and later Ultimate Hope

and also I got on the wiki. and apparently there are technically only 2 other teachers in the entire of the main course..That being Koichi Kizakura The School's Scout/2nd Homeroom Teacher and an Unknown P.E Teacher..

So in the chapter in which Chisa is feeling a bit afraid and suspecting the other teachers were keeping her in the dark..

Chisa was literally suspecting 2 Teachers

kinda hilarious to think that Chisa is afraid of 2 other Teachers with that context
TheGreatestSho chapter 17 . 7/28
I know that you said that probably that Hajime is gonna have a different romance that is not Chiaki...But I don't care if it was Chiaki...I was never a fan of Hajime x Chiaki...But I am interested if the romance in this Fanfiction is gonna be Hajime x Mikan... That ship seems very interesting
TheGreatestSho chapter 12 . 7/27
I just can't wait for Hajime to Become Izuru
TheGreatestSho chapter 10 . 7/27
I am quite enjoying this...Although I kinda wish there was more Interactions of Hajime and Tengan
and also Hajime has Black hair and Paleish-Yellow Eyes for crying out loud
TheGreatestShp chapter 9 . 7/26
I am Eager for him to Interact with Kazuo Tengan again...And I can't wait until you write about Hajime Becoming Izuru...also Hajime has Black Hair and Yellow but somewhat Pale Eyes
1995hzq chapter 21 . 7/25
See you again when you return.
Killusion chapter 21 . 7/25
Hajime's slowing been building up his repertoire and social network but doesn't really recognize it. Self esteem issues are a bitch. Good luck with the combat training, we are living in crazy times.
doomqwer chapter 21 . 7/25
this was nice
naovan10 chapter 21 . 7/25
Thank you for the update and good luck for your combat training.
Twinightprawn chapter 20 . 6/30
Good chapter I like hajime's interactions with the Li'l Ultimates
Spartan10007 chapter 20 . 6/29
I think you handled the Lil’ Ultimates fine. Hajime is gonna have to step up in a new way this time. Looking forwards to more! Until next time
Changeling501 chapter 20 . 6/29
I'm really enjoying the story from the deviations from the plot to the interactions Hajime is having with the other ultimate students. I'm interested to see what you do for the project. I'm kinda hoping that Hajime accepts and goes missing and reading everyone's reaction to that.
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