Reviews for The Armored Alchemist
lilyeng20 chapter 10 . 7/11
Please continue this book I know it’s has been a year and months but please do it take your time
sohrabsadafi.eco chapter 11 . 6/20
so not gonna continue hah?
Eu sunt Dracul 1 chapter 4 . 5/31
Now hold on a sec. What isn't it Greed who can use Ultimate Shield and not Envy?

Envy can shape shift into other beings but not use metal to protect himself. Kinda confused here
Eu sunt Dracul 1 chapter 2 . 5/31
Aren't the levels bit too high for Homunculus? I mean they were hurt by bullets and swords.

A level 75 in New World can withstand attacks that can casually destroys cities in an instant. Unless you are trying to balance up the power up gap, which is kinda understanding
Mojami chapter 11 . 5/27
go on to the next chapter please I really liked the fanfic
hope you post soon
A. V. 12 chapter 11 . 4/2
Will this ever get another chapter?
lilyeng20 chapter 11 . 3/1
I love your work so please do more. Also I love the way you shown their reaction to each over
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 2 . 2/15
There are a multitude of spelling and grammar errors :(

It's not enough to be unreadable, but it is enough to draw me out of your story whenever I see one. Consider getting a beta or using a spellchecker/grammar software to help mitigate this.
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 5 . 2/8
Whats up with the heights?
Ainz is almost 6 feet (5' 10") And Cockytus is over 8 feet. Alphonse is only 6 feet. He should be the same height as Ainz. Not Cockytus.
Ed is about 5 feet tall so you are right about him being a whole head shorter than Ainz.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/9
Me encanta como todos los hechizos que lanza Ainz están tan bien investigados !
Muchas gracias por permitirme disfrutar de este fantástico fic 3
Me disculpo por el comentario en español pero aún que podría estar en inglés de esta forma transmito mejor mis sentimientos ;3
AdventureKing2017 chapter 11 . 12/29/2019
I would really enjot seeing some crossovers of Overlord on Dragon ball (because on z it would be unfair)XD we never trully get something well done with that do we? but hey good work with the badass chapters
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Info dump Chapter 1.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/29/2019
You say Ainz wasn't going soft so he didn't save Hughs but he shouldn't have been gunned down in the first place with how close Ainz was... Here's the order of events.

1. Ainz stumbled on a bleeding military man shouting a code into a phone.
2. A woman with a drawn gun comes up behind the bleeding man. Ainz is suspicious & puts a hand in his GIANT SWORD.
3. Ainz just casually listens to the back & forth between the 2 now obvious combatants & even remarks on Hughes apparently knowing some info he'd like to know.
4. Ainz STILL does nothing as he watches Envy transform & mock a suddenly attacking Hughes. Then proceeds to stand around twiddling his thumbs for Envy to mock Hughes 1 more time & then shoots him.
5. Envy has enough time to hang up the dangling phone & turn around by the time Ainz decides to Finally step in. A mediocre fight ensues & quickly ends with Envy escaping because, suddenly, Ainz DOESN'T want Hughes to die before learning his info. (Which apparently wasn't important enough to step in like 2 minutes earlier to earn the gratitude & trust of the already wounded Hughes.)
6. So now Ainz is left with, Roy is targeted by someone & don't trust the government... Which is fucking worthless but whatever. (Also Envy can now casually reveal Ainz to the rest of the Homunculus when he shouldn't have escaped in the first place... Like the what fuck?)
Mimeomia chapter 8 . 10/14/2019
I really hate plot twisting, srsly, how hard would it be to gate gluttony to the desert and blow him the fuck up?
Mimeomia chapter 1 . 10/14/2019
spoiler-y much?
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