Reviews for Returning from the wilds
knight-ajax chapter 5 . 7/3
Moar moar MOAR! MUUHAHAHAAA!
crow and the butterfly chapter 5 . 6/20
is this story abandoned
Hecseferblade chapter 5 . 4/26
I’m very curious on how you wanted this to go. There’s a lot you could do with the vague Grimm details from the Forrest. Especially since they are very vague in the actual show. From mythological to prehistoric creatures. I half expected a T-Rex in the flashbacks
Obsidian Nova Arc chapter 5 . 11/7/2019
dang this was awesome Can't wait to read more of badass teacher Jaune if he sees that Grimm dragon and calls it a bitch lizard would laugh to death
Ato chapter 5 . 8/23/2019
More now!
Whyyyyy chapter 5 . 7/24/2019
Th-the “I”s... Why...
WHY AREN'T THEY CAPITALIZED!
Really though it’s nice other than that.
NuclearPenStrokes chapter 5 . 5/19/2019
it's quite enjoyable but I noticed quite a few spelling errors and redundant words or phrases, I know I'm not the best at writing but I'm a fair hand at finding slip ups like that, if you want I could help beta occasionally or if your old beta is gone I can try and replace them.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/5/2019
Great series
Alvelvnor chapter 1 . 12/26/2018
I hope for a rose gold Arc pairing.
Rakkis3059 chapter 5 . 12/21/2018
This story is great. I look forward to yout contiued updates. Your English is getting much better. Continue to keep an eye on your word usage.
jeremyathomas44 chapter 5 . 11/2/2018
damn jaune got powerful
IROCK108 chapter 5 . 9/6/2018
noice.
One-Bizarre-User chapter 5 . 9/5/2018
Feed me
new guy chapter 5 . 8/28/2018
you have gotten my attention. keep us the good work, though there are some plot holes still looks good
Fyr RedNight chapter 5 . 7/27/2018
I must say I am very much interested in this story, the plot so far makes me curious to know more about what will happen from now on.

Since Jaune's return up to this chapter, the characters underwent many fascinating changes, and I'm sure they'll only keep evolving from there.

Of course Jaune's character is also a major part of this story, in his complete metamorphosis from the Huntsman-in-Training he was to the battle harderned surviving Huntsman he is now. All while keeping key parts of what makes his character captivating at the beginning.

I'm very much looking forward to read more about this story and to see what kind of other changes will you show us.

Until then, keep up the good job!
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