You're one of the great writers here, love your stories!

great story writing!

looks like the author has a thing for NTR would you like our help with your wife, gf for your fantasy

“Permanently disable rather than throw him in jail”

Does that shallow act somehow remove the fact they got raped?

Like I said you want the illusion of depth without containing any depth you want to see the characters get raped without thinking of any of the horrifying things that would happen to a person that has been raped or the psychological consequences of it

Fuck this story

Lmfao fuck the previous guest

“Bring the characters closer” that’s one way to describe getting gang raped

There’s nothing beautifully written about this it uses sexual assault and rape as a stand-in for being thematically deeper or darker which it isn’t it’s just juvenile you don’t even deal with the years if not decades of therapy it would take to overcome the trauma they’ve experienced

You just want the illusion of depth without having any depth whatsoever

“ would love to read more darker themes by you!”

what you mean is you’re okay with rape as long as it turns you on

I love your story and you did great with have disclaimers. Honestly i loved that you were trying to expand on your horizons and i throughly believe these experiences would bring the characters closer through venting eachothers experiences to eachother, hell with the haters, its your story and i think it is beautifully written. I am going to continue to read and would love to read more darker themes by you! You do an amazing job setting the mood and really amp it up. Im in suspense reading every word. Please dont let this hinder you in the future! I support you!

And now I’m barfing goodbye you’re demented please for the sake of any of your future partners get help

The fact the rape turns you on to the extent that you’re willing to write 22 chapters of rape fantasy is concerning please get help

You’re using sexual assault as a stand-in for darker or deeper which it isn’t it’s just assault this is juvenile you say you want to do something realistic but you treat this like a porno

This is what turns you on oh dear please see a therapist you clearly have problems

Above all you are great writer. But since I have mix feelings for the story. I'll end it here. Have a nice day.

How can we feel bad when she allowed it and liked it like a little slut

It wasn't boring at all. Looking forward for the next chapter!

this is my second time reading this. it’s one of my favorite fics of all time! i noticed you’ve been away for a while, hopefully you’re doing well.

I LOVE IT PLEASE DO MORE!