I sense a sayori death pun...

That's one hell of a chapter. And I can't help but applaud at your dedication when you wrote a last part.

"Monicka's voice is menacing."
Inside my head:
Monika:"Ho? You coming at me? Instead of running away you coming right at me?"
Yuri:"I can't stab the shit out of you without getting closer."
Monika:"Ho ho. Them come as close as you want."

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Natsuki:"Youbetterhaveagoodexplanationformakingus...Oh…" "Whathappenedto[Player]?.AndwhereisSayori?!"Yuri:"I-Iwouldliketoknowaswell..." ...IfeellikeYuriisstaringmoreintenselyatus….andnotinagoodway... "Regarding[Player], 'sfeelingverytirednowsopleaselethimrest. ,hisfallisn'tthemainreasonImadeyoucomehere..." "Natsukitoldmeitwasextremelyurgentandwasevenamatteroflifeanddeath…"Natsuki:"Youknowwehadtoskipschooltocometohere?!Jeez...Idon'tevenwanttoimaginewhatmydadwoulddowhenhewillfindout…"Inthegame,evenduringAct2,herdadhasneverbeatenher,atleast,thegamenevershowedNatsuki' 'sabusevariableisequalto11... , "WhatI'mgoingtotellyoumaylookcrazybutpleasetrustme…"Natsuki:" 'ttrustyou,wewouldn' ,spititoutalready."MonikalooksatNatsuki,pausesonesecondandthenmovesherregardtoYuri. " ,youknowthatIoftengaveyouspecialartificialflavorstomakeyourcupcakes…"Natsuki:"Holdonasec,whatartificialflavors? ." ,Natsuki'smemorydoesn'trememberanythingaboutaroma!Itdoesn'tseemlikeshe'sgoingtobelieveMonika!Monika:"W-well,Idid,don'tyouremember?Forexample,Monday,justbeforetheclubended,Igaveyoutwovialsofanewaromaforyesterday'scupcakesandyourfamily."Natsukibecomesperplexed. "You..youdid?Idon'trememberitbut…nowthatIthinkaboutit,Idon'trememberwellwhathappenedonMonday..."AsNatsuki'suncertaintyincreases, "Why...WhyIcan'tremember...?"Andit' ,it'sincreasing. 'sglitchsurgesback. "It'sOKNatsuki!Forgettingthingshappenstoanyone!Don'tworryaboutit!"Yuri:"M-Monika...Ican'tremembertooaboutwhathappenedMon-Monday…Wh-why...WHY?" !Ifthecharactersrealizetheirmemoriesarefakeandthattheworldisasimulation,itmightevencrashtheworld!WeMUSTdosomething,now![Player]:"Monika!GivethemmoreinformationaboutMondayandtellthemtheycan'trememberbecauseofthedrugs,quickbeforethesimulationbecomescriticallyunstable!" , 'sgrizzling,unsettlingandurging. ,pixelatedboxesareappearingontopofthewholescene,butespeciallyontopofNatsukiandYuri. ,thedensityofboxesisstilllow,andthesound,althoughveryunnerving,isn' ' ' ,doubtandinthecasecaseofYuri...jealousyand...horror?I'mholdingtightlyMonika'shand. ' ,ifshefails, "Moreinformation?!No,weshoulddothecontrary!..." ' "That-that...FEELING!So...methingisWRONG!Justlikethismorning!"NatsukiworriedlycallsYuri:Natsuki:"Yuri!What'swrong…!?"AndthenturnstowardmeandMonika:Natsuki:"Monika,[Player],theheckareyoutalkingabout?'Drug','simulation'?"TheglitchesaroundNatsukiarestabilizingwhiletheonesaroundYuriareincreasing. ,I' "Uh...Okayyoutwo!Let'scalmdown!Ipromisethere'sarationalexpla…"Monika'svoiceisinterruptedbeforeshecanfinishhersentence:Yuri:"Ahahahahahhahhahahahha..." . ' ' "Y-Yuri..!"Theglitchesareslightlydecreasing. "[Player]!Doyouknowwhat'shappeningtoYuri?"Iknow,butIcan' .[Player]:"'yuri_self_harm_level11'." "Ahaha...I'mlosingit,amInot?I...Ifeellikesomethingistakingcontrolofme!"Yuri'sexpressionbecomesslightlylesscrazy. "That'sbecauseofthedrugs!Natsuki,MondayImistakenlygaveyoudrugsinsteadofaromatomakeyourcupcakesandthen…" ,sheinterruptsMonika:Natsuki:"Thehell!Yougaveusdrugs?Whatthef*ckdidyoudoMonika…!" "And[Player]whydoyoukeeptalkingaboutsimulationand'yuri_self_harm_level'?"Ialmostdecidedtospeakup... 'tbelieveIcandefusetheexplodingsituation. "Natsuki,pleasebelieveme!ItwasamistakeIswear! 'tdoitonpurpose. ." ,sheisn' . " 'trememberwellyougivingmearoma...Thatdrugmayexplainit...But...Monika,stopsayingbullsh*t."SheglaresatmeandMonika. "What...No!It'sthetruthIpromise!Iunderstandit'sdifficulttobelieve...butyouknowIwouldn'tlietoyou,wouldI?"Natsuki:"... ?Andmoreimportantly,whatareyoutwotalkingaboutsinceearlier...Itlookslikeyou' ,spitthetruth!" …Uh...Ishoulddosomething!Anything![Player]:"Natsuki,I...Imean,weareNOTplottinganything!WhatMonikasaidistrue. ,well,thedrugaffectseachpersonindifferentways…"Yuriinterruptsmewithacalmyet,awfullydreadful,voice:Yuri:"[Player] 'snoneedtodefendthatbitch,she'smanipulatingyou..." "Likeus. ...andwhySayoriisabsent..." "Youdruggedus!Justtogetclosetohim,didn'tyouMONIKA!"Dropsofbloodarefallingdownfromhereyes!Monika:"No...you'reallmyfriends!Iwouldhaveneverdonethat!Ididn'tknowit,pleaseYuri,rememberthetimeswespenttogether!YouknowIwouldneverhurtyou!" "...I... ' 'timagineIdidn'tmissthesluttyglancesyougaveto[Player]yesterday!Hm,Iwonderwhatyoutoldhimlastweektomakehimjointheclub?"Afterashortpause, "Butyouhadtofindsomewaytogethimcloserandtomakeusunattractive...Soyouputdrugsinourcupcakes!...Butdon'tworry,Icanimaginehowyoufeel...Imean,[Player]issokindandcute!IfeellikemyheartisgoingtoexplodewheneverIthinkofhim!" ?!Natsuki:"WaitYuri!You'renotyourself!Don'tdoanythingharsh!"Monika:"...Sothat' 'tknowwhatI'mcapableof."Monika' ' ,you'renotgoingtohurtthem,areyou…?Justafter, "I'mback![Player],Monikaareyouhere?"Herquestionisansweredwhenshenoticesus. ,I' ,shereallydidn' "Natsuki?Yuri?I'msohappyyoucame!So…"SheremarksYuri'sandNatsuki' "Wait...Yuri,areyoualright?Youdon'tlooksogood…"Yuri:"Sayori, ' 'sallherfault!"Natsuki:"No!Yuri,stop!Please!Monika,I'msorryforblamingyou!...Ican' 'twanttobelievethatdreambut...there'ssomethingIhavebeenhidingtoo!"'Thatdream'?Coulditbe…?Sayorilooksbetweenme,Natsuki,YuriandMonika. ' "Lastnight,Ihadareallyweirddream...Inthatdream,someonelike'God' ...hewantsustokilleachother!Hemustbetheonebehindallourproblems!" . . "Iknowright!Itlookscrazy,butit...I...I'mdeadserious!Ididn'twanttobelieveitatfirsttoobutYuri,Monika,[Player]...you'resuddenlyactingsoweird...I...Idon'twantanyonetogethurt!"Glitchesareonceagainincreasing. 'mdoingmyutmost,despitemyanxietyandtiredness,tounderstandthisphenomenon. 'tbelonguntilNatsukiunderstandsthisworldisasimulation!Ifthathappens...woulditreallycrashthesimulation?Accordingtotheincreasinggravityoftheglitchesyes...butwhy?Charactersaresupposedtobelievetheworldisreal. 'tbelieveinitanymore, ' 'sit!Ihavegotit!ImusttellthisconclusiontoMonika!NatsukifocusesherattentiononMonikaandtoalesserextent, "Monika,yousawthemtoo,right?Iknowyoudid.'God'toldmehetalkedtoanothermemberoftheclubandgavethemaletter...It'syou,isn'tit?"Shit!MonikanowknowsthereshouldbeTWOletters!Goddammit,it'sgettingworseandworse!Iftheworlddoesn'tcrash,thenYuriwillkillsomeone...Ifnot,Monikawilldiscovermyletter! . ' . "Idon'tseewhatyou'retalkingabout…"IwhisperasquietlyaspossibletoMonika:[Player]:"Theworldisabouttobedestroyed!WemustdivertNatsuki'sattention!"Shewhispersmeback:Monika:"Iknow!I...Ikeeptryingseveralconsolecommandsbut...Ican'tfindanythingtogetusoutofthispredicament."Natsuki:"[Player]...youknowittoo...Maybehetalkedtoyou... ...Yousaidsomethingabout'simulation'andmathearlier…"F*ck,f*ck,f*ck...Idon'twant...Idon'twanttoletitendlikethis!..Ican't...IDON'TWANTTODIE!Damnit!Desperatetimescallfordesperatemeasures!Outofnowhere, , ' 'teventakethetimetoenjoythesoftnessofMonika' 'tfeelanyshyness,affection, ' . 'sface. . 'sreaction. ' . . . "MONIKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"IreadymyselftocatchYuri'sarm…Idon'tknowifIcanmakeit,butIhavetotry!ButbeforeIevenattempttocatchherarm,atableappearsbetweenmeandYuri!ItfallsdownonthetopofthealreadyexistingtablebetweenthesofaandtheTV. ' . ?IhearMonika' "Iwon'tletyouhurthim."[THEM]:"CONGRATULATIONFORFINDINGTHISSECRETMESSAGEREADERS!TOREWARDYOU,LETUSTELLYOUANINTERESTINGFACT:MCISSTILLALIVEANDEXISTSASECONDPERSONALITYOF[PLAYER]!" ?IrememberMonika'swords:"Icanreadthem,createnewfiles,orevendeletethembutIcan'teditexistingfiles!"and"Really?Hm...Ididn' 'sacommandIcanexecute?".Then...canshecreateanyobjectinthisworldusingconsolecommands?Natsuki:"Whatthehell?"Yuri:" ."Sayori:"I'm...nothallucinating,I'm?Justnow,anewtableappeared…?"Thecoordinategridisreappearing... 'snowreallydifficulttoseeorhearwhatisgoingon…No…Natsuki:" ...Thisworldisn'treal,isit?" "WhyIcan'trememberwhathappenedbeforeyesterday...Whysuchcrazythingshappenoneafteranother...Why...Noo...HowcouldInotnoticeitbefore…? . ' "It'sso...empty…!Thisplace...myhouse...there'snothing!Evenmyfamily…"Atthispoint, . 'mparalyzedbyfear. "They...don'tEVENHAVEFACES!AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" ,Ifeelsomeoneverydeartomehuggingmefrombehind. "Iloveyou."

You think you're the first ddlc fanfic author to Grace me with a coded message? Ha!
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the time in your world advances at the same rate. After you were transported to DDLC, your original body stayed there. You are currently in a comma, in a hospital room. If you die in DDLC or stuck forever, your original body would then die and your world would continue as normal, without you.

to cuote Dr Oblleck"If you dont learn from history then you are destend to repeat it"(oh he is from RWBY made by Rooster teeth...if you didn't know already)

It was a terrible idea to write the dialogue like this

great story

Natsuki: "You better have a good a good explanation for making us... Oh..." "What happened to [Player]? And where is Sayuri?!" Yuri: "I-I would like to know as well..."

Well, I'm not gonna bother to double check, but this seems to be just the dialogue from the last chapter plus the dialogue from this one, but backwards.

Oh, the letter thing is easy. Just shove it in your underwear. Sure, it would be pretty uncomfortable, but you wouldn't have to worry about someone reading it.

This is the best Fanfiction I've ever read. I can't even find the words to express my feelings about this masterpiece..

I'm glad I didn't kill myself last month.

or YOU dying

Welp, better get on Monika's side FAST.

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

The real question is where's the real mc?