I just discovered this story and I read it within a day.
I really hope you continue this.

Well, fucking hell. Had to add Hermione and Longbottom. Worse, nothing basically changes, he still ends up confronting the troll for i can only assume because it happened in the books.

Come to think of it, did flying lessons even have all houses together for them? I can't really remember and can't be bothered looking it up but going by how every other class seems to be two houses together for them i can only assume the same for flying lessons which would mean that Harry wouldn't have even been at the same lesson a Malfoy and Longbottom.

I think i started reading this before and ditched it at this chapter because of the Hermione and Longbottom. It seems familiar and i want to drop it now so yeah.

Seems interesting but i really hope Hermione aint gonna have much to do with Harry, if anything.

Do you perhaps mean "bayu bayushki bayu?"

I know you’ve lost your desire to continue this story seriously, but it’s a really good story. There are a ton of things that I like about it, but what sticks out to me is your willingness to step away from canon and how you deepened the magic of the mind arts.

You’ve done a really nice job of building a character, who while obviously concerned about surviving Voldemort, is primarily concerned with becoming a Titan of magic in his own right, or in your words, a centennial wizard. I like that a lot. It’s easy to get bogged down in canon and the issues of facing Voldemort.

There were definitely tonal changes in the last couple chapters versus earlier in the story, but part of me really hopes you can fall in love with it again. My readers love to play the ‘when will you update next’ game, so I’m not going to do that. I’ll just hope that you’ll find a new love for it. Even though you’re a different person than when you started this fic, that can be a source of strength, an advantage to exploit, a way to take the story in a new direction.

Thanks for sharing this with us. I’m not an RWBY guy, so I can’t transition with you over to your primary focus, but I wish you luck there.

I just found your story a few days ago and binge read it. It really connected with me. Then I get to this chapter and read the AN. I am sorry to see that you will not be continuing with this story. I selfishly wish you would but I understand the need for you to write what is beneficial to you. Thank you for the effort you put into this story.

Whaaat? No dragon?

Hello, my name is Solus. I am not going to lie, I was looking for a different story when I found this. But then I realized that I LOVED this story. I myself have been raised by abusive relatives, been in and out of Juvie and their mental rehabilitation centers for several mental problems. So I can relate to this story on a smaller degree. I really love the story and have grown fond of it. I stayed up all night reading it and only managed 3 hours of sleep. And it was completely worth it. I know some people don't show their appreciation of this sort but I want you to know that this story is amazing. Hell, I'm even going to log in and give it a follow and fav. Please don't abandon this story. I'd even settle for a single chapter every other month if that made it possible.

Love it!

Really enjoyed the story thus far. Truly exceptional, unique and original. It is a shame that you no longer take joy from it but i look forward to any possible updates

ooog great story tbh. though some things need to be worked out, its a pretty good story

I sincerely wish this story hasn't been abandoned. However is that is what's happened, I'm glad the ending is a cliffhanger.
This has been an absolutely amazing story.

Great chapter, I’m sorry to read that you won’t be focusing on this fic but please do what’s healthy for you.

I’ll definitely check out your other fics, you’re a really talented writer so I’m sure I’ll enjoy them.

I just discovered this fic 2 days ago and have devoured it. It is fantastic! I do hope you decide to continue it. I really like the progression of Harry’s relationship with Dumbledore.

Follows without reviews are due to the story being inactive. It feels like screaming into the void or throwing a message in a bottle out to sea.
(Don’t have much to say about the story itself (and I don’t think you care about criticism of this one in particular), just thought I’d chuck it a review and a perspective given the AN).