Reviews for Final Protocol
Guest chapter 13 . 7/26
They carefully set up some privacy wards, then walked away from them before discussing all the time travel secrets where Rita may have overheard them. And the healer told everyone about Harry being reliant on the soul bond, so Susan will be targeted by Death Eaters and the ministry. Oops.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/26
Creepy feeling to have a couple 35 year olds looking 12, kissing and talking about marriage with children's equipment. Yeah, yeah, it's their souls, not their bodies, but I find if difficult to overlook their preadolescent appearance. I was 100percent into the story till Sirius mentioned marriage.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/25
Yay! Sirius and Harry, reunited.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/25
The is delightful.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/25
Lol. Thank you for this.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/25
How vulnerable, to be a quadriplegic mute, even if only for a short while. And from the beginning, I've wondered about self- cleaning diapers.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/25
Lol. Nobody called an ambulance for Vernon, unconcerned whether he lives or dies.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
Fascinating beginning.
simmingdae chapter 13 . 5/25
this fic is so good! i've been looking for a well written susan/harry fic for the past couple of days and this hit everything i wanted in a fic. sadly it's unfinished.
QuienLee chapter 14 . 3/30
Se agradece la historia. Es una lastima que este en hiatus. Saludos.
Marauder no. Five chapter 14 . 2/28
i do hope there is more to come in the future. I really enjoyed this so far and now I am curious - is Tom Riddle possessing another student (or adult) or is this a prank? is it Yaxley? Will Susan's eyebrows grow back to what they had been?
Princess Saphira chapter 9 . 2/19
Hufflepuff's thingy is a cup. Could it be true?
PythonAnon chapter 14 . 12/20/2019
I'd be interested to see where this goes, should you choose to continue it.
Fugacity chapter 14 . 9/19/2019
This has been quite good so far.
I do hope you come back some day and finish it.
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 14 . 6/28/2019
A really different turn on the Harry Potter legend
Looking forward tomorrow
Thank you for sharing
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