Huh. This is a very interesting story. I very much enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

A couple of comments. "Whether" is spelled "wHether" not "wether." And apostrophes (') are a thing. I'd suggesting learning how to use them.

And here comes more chaos.

Well... Fuck

Wait... so Danny is alive and with Cauldron I assume... with Cauldron discussing just exactly what to do about 'Alice'. I can't wait to see what the conclusion will be...

You know, I think this is the scariest Taylor I've read... and that includes the Cthulhu ones.

Whelp... I think he deserved that...

Seriously though... The situation is kinda screwed up.

ahh Coil, we knew you well :)

interesting.

So the Snake is Coil, the Dragon must be Lung, the Maze is probably Labrinth. But I am blanking on the Monster. The Monster could be anything from Scion to Jack Slash and the S9 to the Endbringers. This could not happen to a better villain.

A fitting end for Coil...

Couple problems with this chapter:
You mention 3 protectorate are holding out but only list two of them
Next paragraph ends with 'so that none of her apparently disloyal and traitorous."' Capes? Can what?

Coil lets out a shriek twice in a row
'as pair of slim, striped fur with various purple shades' -perhaps 'as a pair of slim arms, striped with various shades of purple fur'
distant secondary concern to the face of the girl - while looking into the face?
Need to capitalize coil?" and mister Calvert

You know, I figure that your Coil here will end up thinking he was better off kissing Nilbog then pissing off Taylor. What do you think?

I love your work but man it was to short.

Anyway, good work and stay safe from Corona Virus

Nice

You'd think Coil would have known better than to keep both timelines
in his base? One should have been working at home during all this.