FINALLY A MAN OF GOOD TASTE. I ALSO DO NOT LIKE THAT PATHETIC HINATA. AS FROM WHERE IT STANDS SHE SHOULD HAVE DIED IN THE PEIN ARC. KISHIMOTO WAS PATHETIC TO KILL OFF NEJI FOR HINATA AND NARUTO RELATIONSHIP

Dogshit story, not fit to be printed out to clean one's ass.

Also stop using lowercase i you brain-dead monkey

The only thing I have a issue is Kunou because she has a daughter in Dxd why isn’t present.

WELL, at least the cliff hanger wasn't that big. Though I would have preferred it ending with Jiraiya yelling "WHAAAT!" when Naruto tells him about his silver tailed mistress, ya know to poke fun at the Pervy Sage.

LMAO I'm surprised you didn't make Naruto make the guards give Jiraiya a cavity search and then let him go free.

The only one that gets to screw Naruto is life

Bashing, and hating characters without trying to understand them will always be a disgusting and disappointing side of fanfiction community.

I love the story, I hope you continue soon, greetings, see you, bye!

Wow! you are also a typical Hinata hater... The way you are portraying(bashing) her character shows that you are just being petty and childish. I prefer NarutoxTsunade pairing. but I really don't mind other pairings also. I dislike Sakura(pre shippuden) as character, but I don't like stories where she is bashed. Why? because it just degrades the quality of the story.
And you should do some research on both universe before try to write the story. There is too much holes in your story.

Japan is bigger than the Elemental Nations? Lol ... You should go and do your research first before trying to write shi*ts...

Hi!
I am liking the story concept and the story itself! Just a tip though, please capitalize the 'I' when referring to oneself in both dialogues and Author Notes!

Thanks!

There is a God... you have no idea how long I've waited to find a fix that was good and didn't have NaruHina...I hate it too and that pairing can burn... thank you my good sir...

Uuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh I actually got excited because I thought this update was a new chapter what a bummer! :(

Yep just like 99% of fanfic authors I'm not going to even bother reading the rewrite since so know you will never finish it. You're half assed excuse after 1000 reviews seemed to have you think even half are going to comeback to this after this shit you pulled. Was a good story but I know you won't ever finish the rewrite and won't waste my time with this new one after waiting/invested on this story for so long

bit disappointing, but im excited for the rewrite!