Reviews for Total War:Remnant Revised
jupitermonkey4 chapter 5 . 15h
Hell yeah, im down to see this picked back up. I normally dislike gamer fics but I would often think back on this story concept as the exception.

Pumped to see more!
J-Kit chapter 5 . 23h
Looking foreward to the next chapter. I really enjoyed the uniqueness of the fanfic and was disappointed when you stopped. Good Luck and have fun!
VoteableDuke chapter 5 . 8/27
Nice to hear you've found your footing again, can't wait to see the results.
DragonTetho chapter 4 . 8/27
Of course, Jaune they're going to be real people. What do you expect? The moment they are "spawned/borned" is the moment they received their sentience/soul and thus is a living being. It's just like an AI evolving and becoming more smarter until it has been able to differentiate reality, define its own gender, and many more things. Hope this will be a lesson for him and at the same time hope that at least he matures and take things a bit more serious this time with his people on war with Grimm and other Barbarians out there, I would try and suggest to take a hint on what the Romans, the Chinese(medieval), and various Empires/Kingdoms on Earth and try to blend it or at least take some ideas from them to help Jaune and his "Eternal Empire".

Also, where are the Imperial Aquillas?! You can never go wrong with Imperial Aquillas!
IHateGenericCereal chapter 5 . 8/27
Oh neat, I'm glad to see you're back. I really like the concept on this one, since no other gamer fics I've read really seem to go for the RTS angle. Looking forward to seeing how you improve what you've already written here.
dragonbornthesam chapter 5 . 8/26
Back on the grind! Woo hoo! Good luck with the girl and college.
zlap chapter 1 . 8/26
Why make him eleven years old, or is that a typo?
drubengene chapter 5 . 8/26
welcome back then mate
FrostyChops chapter 1 . 8/26
Huh, I'm genuinely looking forward to the updates, this story was already a super interesting concept so it getting fleshed out more will be welcome :D Glad to see you back
Bartholemeow chapter 5 . 4/14
Let me guess, jaune needs a new gaming pc now?

My humble suggestion is, if anything, to adapt the conquest game mode into the main plot of the show as soon as possible, lest you run out of creative back support to work on.
merendinoemiliano chapter 4 . 9/9/2019
Return soon
Asher Silverman chapter 1 . 9/3/2019
No updates I guess
PhaedoSymposium chapter 5 . 7/30/2019
Well that was certainly a dark turn this is a really clever concept for a story with overall decent execution nice job.
bankerrtx01 chapter 5 . 6/17/2019
Well I’ll c u soon
Prince Pondincherry chapter 2 . 3/16/2019
I see Jaune isn't quite processing this as "real" yet. "The Eternal Empire" is a stupid name for an empire when you're actually going to have to have diplomacy with the Kingdoms. Of course, he's also a dumb kid; this is JAUNE, and he's YOUNGER than canon!

Yep, he was totally suppressing it.

I'm hoping that Jaune will realize that his units aren't real people, so he should sacrifice them to protect real people. Seems like an obvious point to me. Of course, he's still thinking like a slightly bloodthirsty twelve-year-old and wants to conquer Remnant instead of protect it. Which could still work out well, of course, it's just not as heroic as he could be.
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