Huh, Krolia isn't supposed to show up for a while. I hope you continue!

You know how to keep them in character. And that koala bit, genius.

I love Keith. His temperment and lone wolf personality always draws me in.

Interesting start.

i like it D heureuse de voir la suite arriver même si cest court ;) et je me doutais aux vus des paroles du Blade que cela ne pouvait qu'être Krolia qui avait répondus à l'appel pour sortir Keith :) je pressens qu'il va avoir de la casse et que des Galra vont en faire les frais XD trop hâte de lire la suite :) good luck D

Awesome chapter and I look forward to your next one.

Ahhh! What's going to happen? I can't wait for the next update.

Awesome chapter and i look forward to your next one.

Awesome chapter and i look forward to your next one.

This was an amazing chapter and i can't wait for your next one.

OMG! This is the kind of fic I've been looking for in ages, even I have considered writing a fic. But now that I've found your story... I'm happy n_n

I don't tend to read Keith-centric stories often but this one intrigued me and I'm glad I clicked. I love seeing a more Blade perspective on the whole matter and you write both Kolivan and a more sympathetic Galran, Jak, very well.
I'm also adoring Lotor (I have such a spot for snarky, preening Lotor and yours makes me so happy) and Keith is fantastic. You've really captured (haha) his personality and his feelings. That headbutt at the end here just made me laugh with delight. Lotor is going to have his hands full!
If I might make one suggestion to help with read-ibility it would be helpful to put new dialogue from a character into a new paragraph. I saw it mostly at the end of chapter two and it got a little hard to follow as to who was saying what.
Loving the story and plot and eagerly awaiting more!

This was an awesome chapter and i can't wait to find out what happens next.

This is a really cool story so far and i look forward to your next chapter.

Great story, can't wait to read more