Please update this is a really amazing story

More slow development and power hiding retard bullcrap. Keep it dead jack off.

nice prologue sample. can't wait to read the actual chapter.

Fuck you

doflamingo 2.0

My frend, whr is next?

PLEASE UPDATE!

Can you please update? :'( I really want to see where you go with this story as you're clearly not done with writing.

Update :3

I just had a thought of Jaune in this story being like Felix, where he has been maintaining a charade and really has been working with Salem, so I'd really like it if you had Jaune fight with knifes that are remote explosives in the future. Just a thought.

right I'm confused. it says it was updated a little while ago but there are no new chapter whats going on? Also, I needed to comment as a guest because it wouldn't let me re-comment on my account. some1 explain!

Interesting story can’t wait to see more

I need more of this my dude, so excited

Maybe he so doflamingo,s son or maybe adopted

Oh, Oum, another fucking story where Jaune is treated as the victim where he isn't at all. I like him as a charachter, but 'my parents didn't train me/want me to become an Huntsman/whathever' isn't an excuse at all to commit a crime thath could put his life and many others in great danger(as actually happened)withouth even having the knowledge to do so and neither taking things seriosly. And i don't care about whath shitty background he would have. Conclusion? His friends have all the rights to be angry at him and leaving in his own shit, but they wouldn't because they are decent human/faunus beings. If you want a Jaune sided with the villains, find a better excuse to do so. And sorry for my little rant, i really just hate this premise, is bad as the betrayed Percy stories.