*SCREAMS*
WHAT DIDJA DO TO MA CHILD?!

Wow!
So very thankful for this gem; it's extremely rare to find a Captured Fic not about Lance.
And this was done very very well! You could have gone and draw the story out, making it multiple chapters, but I really like how you finished it! That ending was amazing. It left you wanting more and wondering if Keith was okay. Which was AWESOME.

Great Fic, I might reread this sometime, and It'll be super exciting to see a Part Two! :DDD