Reviews for Reincarnations
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
Well thanks for the warning at least.
I plan to stay far away now cause fuck that shit I'm out.
diegoossorio1 chapter 3 . 9/22/2018
Still waiting update
DirePanda072 chapter 3 . 7/21/2018
This was great and I really hope you continue it! This fic has a lot of potential and I'd hate to see it go down the drain
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/12/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
god of all chapter 3 . 6/2/2018
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
NarHina chapter 3 . 5/27/2018
It's alright, though it is bugging me that Tenzo wasn't taken away by the third until around 8 years after nine tails. And Yugao would be 10 right after the attack, while she would still be in Anbu does since she was recruited at a young age, I feel the big sister role would have been a better start point, you then could have add Yagao adopt Naruto officially after she got older and have try and get him to call her Kaa-san. Juts kind of bugs you when you don't have any idea of there age.

Also the sun mark for the sage is white, not brown.

Besides those canon parts being different it was pretty good though it does feel everything is going Naruto's way. But his interactions with Hinata and other character make up for it.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
kirstywilson2004 chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
Please update
Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 3 . 4/12/2018
interesting way to go
HurZysn chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
Ok looking forward to next chapter
TheRedeemer1995 chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
This is pretty good! I'm looking forward to more. Hope to see you return the favor for my works!
Tainted Uchiha chapter 3 . 4/2/2018
Just wanted to throw out a quick review to tell you how well you are doing so far.
I have read a lot of Naruto fanfiction throughout the years and can honestly say that you are easily in the top 2% of writers I have read.
The fanfic has a very promising start. A nice well thought out plot. Something a little different to other stories on the site and I like that it will be a strong/Godlike Naruto fiction. They are very enjoyable but often are hard to write and therefore are poorly presented and poorly recieved.
I think you have obvious skill as a writer. You do not suffer from the same pitfall many strong writers on here do and try to overcomplecate your story. The pace seems good and the plot seems strong.
Not sure what your idea in terms of progression in time span are for the near future of the fic. I think I would like to see some form of progression in terms of training/ timeskip in the next few chapters simply for the pace of the story and to enable you to write some much more exciting sequences and this may appeal to more casual readers.
I am very interested to see where you go from here. Look forward to more from you.
jenuzumaki chapter 2 . 4/2/2018
I have no problem with Naruto being stronger than normal. But I think it’s too early for him to master nature chakra, the change in eye color or any skin markings are signs of mastering the said chakra. And the cross pupils were the signs for completing or mastering toad sage. Maybe give him the same markings as Hashirama to show that he’s using nature chakra, although I’m not familiar with the eye changes if any on the Shodaime. But making him stronger even though his sage mode isn’t complete should be okay.
I’m against him calling Yugao as Kaasan, maybe nee-san only. Maybe make him treat both Yamato and Yugao like his older siblings. I’m being unfair I know, but the only one I can see him treating like his mother would be Tsunade.
ByakuSharingan123 chapter 3 . 4/2/2018
Hey this story is pretty good! I only have one request: Please don't make Naruto OP right off the bat. I think it would be better if he awakened his latent powers (control over 5 chakra natures etc.) in his Shippuden-age. And please don't give him a dojutsu.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
orein123 chapter 2 . 4/2/2018
Great start. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Also, a bit of punctuation advice: all punctuation marks are attached to the preceding word with no spaces in between. Almost all of your question and exclamation marks have had a space between them and the word they followed. Doesn't really change what they mean, but as an english professor once told me, the purpose of standardized formatting is to tell us what is happening without drawing our attention away from the words. If it breaks the format, it screams out more than a misspelled word or improper grammar.
YMCM chapter 2 . 4/1/2018
I agree with the last two reviewers, Doujutsu Naruto is overused, while six paths Naruto is rare. Also, give Naruto his ability to fly early! It would be cool to see a young Naruto flying and his reaction to it. That being said, great chapter!
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