This Shiro and season 6 Shiro/Kuro...yeah I like this Shiro better

I've gotta admit, considering how things really went in season 6, I still would've preferred this take on Keith and Krolia. You did a great job of keeping everyone in character (and I know he was more of a cameo, but I swear I could HEAR Coran's voice in my head with the dialogue you chose to give him. Really good job!) and mentioning Shiro having to do ground control on Pidge, Hunk, and Lance's sentry-bot antics was so awesome! Made me crack a smile.

Super good job on this one-shot! :D

That was amazing!

Krolia is my favorite character, as of late, and I love everything about her. Can't wait to read anyother books you may make involving her! (I loved this one especially.)

YES. Just the closure I craved, plus it was cute and super cool how you fit it into the canon show. You wrote everyone /so well/. The dialogue was natural and the prose flowed effortlessly. It was a beautiful little piece of fic that warmed my brotp-loving heart. Thank youuuuu

I already love Krolia from just watching season five and this somehow increased my love for her?

this was really good! it actually seems very in character, for keith, shiro and coran. i would love for something like this to happen on the show, although considering the whole shiro/kuron thing, it seems implausible. And i loved the bit in the end, when shiro was interrupted because of lance,pidge and hunk's adventure, and his reaction to it was spot on. thanks for writing this :D

Awww! Somehow, this is exactly how I envision this to happen: poor Keith is overwhelmed and turns to Shiro, receives advice and reassurance, and stalwartly moves forward (as always) through this new obstacle in his life. The poor baby!

I really liked how you had Coran in there, too! Just a little cameo, but I enjoyed him being there and saying how supportive he is of Keith. :)

Thank you for writing!