A masterpiece.

I want to read more but I also know this was a great ending for this oneshot

You should make this happen !

Lmao

You really had fun with this eh?

There's no need for Jaune being overpowered. Just him overtroll other would be more than enough

You need to continue this my dude, had me laughing my ass off, inside my head of course with the occasional giggle coming out, anyway this is awesome!

Please don't leave this as is, this is the start of something hilarious! Great job, never stop writing

Please. More jailbait and loli.

I only wish this was continued.

Honestly this is nicer story than your dragonball crossover which i do think would be great if the story dont fell so force... You seem better to have free reign part of story than ones that you have a forced set of rules limiting you... This story if flesh out can be a really superb story with whacky and serious part equivalent kinda like gintama... Also be a funny arkos cause this a jaune who kinda promiscuous but seem to held a another depth to him and can handle nora craziness and he will semmingly actively try to ship Renora... Also might cause Pyrhha imagination to go wild haha

noice :)

That was hilarious! Please continue!

please drink more

Fucking hilarious

Good shit. I love it!