you are a genius for making this fic

Good Chapter!

WTF?

Interesting very interesting keep up the good work.

I laughed so hard with All the references and the 4th Wall breaking and the Lemon was pretty good too, so keep up the great work pal

I just came to say I like the story cover art.

wow. this is going to eventually turn into a war that will engulf all of remnant isn't it? well sit back, grab some popcorn and watch the chaos unfold. wonder who's next besides willow schnee. at any rate can't wait to see the next chapter.

Ha! I'm glad I'm not in his shoe.
Good luck Jaune, your going to need it.

I was excited that the chapter was so long, but as I continued to read, I grew more disappointed. The grammar issues are minor, but could be cleaned up to give the chapter more polish, but my real issue is the plot itself.
The summary describes the story as a harem comedy that's mostly a serious of disconnected one-shots within the same 'universe'. But most of this chapter is heavy yandere moments with too many pop culture references and cultural indicators. I tend not to get offended very often, but I found the whole conversation about 'queers' and the raised fist to be a huge eyeroll moment.
Finally was the matter of CRDL. That scene seems to have no place in a story like this, much less CRDL 'robbing' other students. As if Ren, or Jaune at this point, for that matter, would kowtow in such a fashion.
The chapter on its own isn't necessarily bad, but considering what this story is advertised as, it doesn't really fit. That, and trust me, throwing in a bunch of cultural references every 4 or 5 chapters seems like a funny thing, but it tends to annoy people.
See you next chapter.

Good

Jaune's got enough skill but still can't break Cardin's ego, at least break the evidence. Now the question is, how is Jaune gonna survive the wave of women coming after him.

wat

Nice

Hmm, can we get someone like, I dunno, Emerald next? If only because Em is almost never after Jaune in your stories, instead always acting like a general menace under Cinders thumb.

So it's safe to assume this story is a narrative instead of a series of one-shots? Good. I prefer them, especially when there's some semblance of a plot to it as this one seems to have.