Reviews for Gravitas
zigmas chapter 2 . 7/6
Technically, if he helps to rein in Azn Big Babies and Drugsters, it's not that bad that he'd be doing this under so-called Nazis.
The best part?
The moment he LEARNS that they are Nazis, he should be revolted enough to drop shit on THEM as well, including the deception part.
And unlike Coil, Max has nothing but his own "muscles" to try and stop the new guy.
He can't outsmart him OR out-precog him.
(Out-precog a COG, mwahahaha.)
Now, if it was Coil taking the guy in, THEN it'd be an actual problem.
Harmonious Arkos Sloth chapter 2 . 2/25
Pickup's about to have a Very Bad Day once Jericho finds him. Also, hope you keep book spoilers to a minimum. I want some mystery when I start editing book two.
Kateri87 chapter 2 . 2/20
Oh, Honey.
Edocsiru chapter 2 . 2/11
This chapter disappointed me, too many inserted characters just like your mystalian fic.. Guess won't be reading this one anymore either *sigh*
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9
To much context missing. And no I'm not buying your book just to fill in what your to lazy to write about your own character. Worse, if this represents your writing then you should still be in 10th grade and practicing character development and story flow! Obviously your fully counting on every single reader to know Worm by heart, but why would you expect the same for your flop of a book written by a nobody that no one has every read. And yes you are playing off the book no one has read. YOU arnt filling in ANY of the details for EITHER world. And this fool is about as serious as micky mouse! Mark this as a humor/parody before you get flagged for miss a labeled story. Sci-Fi lmao! yea right
Sang28 chapter 2 . 2/9
Hmm nice story start here . As a guy who lives in the deep South (yeah native Florida guy even I don't understand the bias ) I've seen a few like pickup. Can't wait to see how armsy takes the new tinker. Looking forward to the next one
Gremlin Jack chapter 2 . 2/9
I'm really hoping Pete figures out what the E88 is about and goes Hulk on them.
Difdi chapter 2 . 2/9
Guys like Pickup always leave me slightly torn - they're wrong about so much in the world, and they act as supervillains as a result of believing things that just aren't true. But at the same time, guys like Pickup are motivated by a desire to do what is right that any paladin type would find familiar - the refusal to be the guy who stands by and does nothing while evil triumphs.

Now if we could just get guys like him to realize that having dark skin doesn't make you a bad guy all by itself.
cfp33pfc chapter 1 . 2/8
Just bought your book on Amazon. Will wait to read this after. Thanks for writing.
Dymian chapter 2 . 2/8
... Umm... The guy inside the suit isn't black...is he? Cuz I can see this going down really badly in a very short amount of time...
jfcwtfusernames chapter 2 . 2/8
Pete is a pillock
Fraukage chapter 1 . 2/22/2019
I! Love this!
MattKennedy chapter 1 . 8/2/2018
Very cool start to a story! I really like G-Man's perspective on the craziness of Earth Bet. :D
sonic chapter 1 . 7/18/2018
I liked the chapter!
Snappy Flowah chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
HA!
Hmmm, seems interesting... definitely a good read. And don't worry Author-dono, I'll gladly way for the next decade or so for your books to hit the shelves, best regards on that.
Yours,

~Snappy~
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