Reviews for Out of Time
chiposkippy chapter 3 . 7/14
This is really good keep it up!
is unavailable chapter 3 . 6/18
i have two problems with this story one you say yuueii which is very annoying the school's name is U.A not yuueii also you say nedzu which is also wrong its nezu look it all up your clearly not a true fan
AkaDeca chapter 2 . 4/5
Cool stuff
AkaDeca chapter 1 . 4/5
So what is his quirk?
MetalBatt chapter 1 . 3/27
Wow, what an interesting concept! My favorite mha fics revolve around time travel, but to have Izuku travel forward in time and not back due to his circumstances really spices up things! And him not wielding OFA and instead another strength based quirk that was also one of the first? Hell yeah, sign me the fuck up with this story :D!
evanonymous chapter 3 . 3/19
Well these versions of the heroes seem to be beyond stupid.
you shall not know my name chapter 3 . 3/7
I loved this story... and then I looked at the date of the last update...
Please continue this story, if at all possible
ProjectIceman chapter 3 . 1/16
Really great story! I was hooked from the first cchapter. It's too bad there are only 3 chapters...and its been a while since it was updated. But I like this take on a time-displaced Izuku. One of the first heroes of a bygone era before the Heroic System was developed.
notvisiulebliss chapter 3 . 8/23/2019
I feel like izuku should be stronger and more skilled considering the era he came from I mean the only one who could step to him would be all for one right?
Guest chapter 3 . 6/23/2019
Is izuku wearing the mcu captain America outfit
Guest chapter 3 . 6/10/2019
So, I'll start this review with saying I've liked this so far, it is quite interesting to see a seemingly somewhat morally grey Izuku pulling a Captain America here. His capture is rather believable as he was drugged, injured, weakened from his time travel and weary from several days on the run. I do like how it seems there were plenty of struggle and hardship at the beginning for Izuku when those with quirks were treated similar to mutants from Marvel's X-men comics.

However I do have a few issues with this story's plot. First and foremost, the heroes seem to all immediately want to capture Izuku, and as understandable as that may seem. There appeared to be NO ONE that was trying to think of any other way. They comment about it in chapter 2, mostly about a hero that largely barks and growls, but they seem to have no issues with drugging and kidnapping essentially the first hero in history. I find it somewhat difficult to believe that there aren't at least a few professional heroes who idolized Midoriya in some regard as a beacon of hope, somewhat like Superman from DC comics or how All Might is viewed in MHA. I also can't agree with how quick Midoriya agreed to join them. It just doesn't make sense with the character you provided so far. This Midoriya seems to have for lack of better words; gone through some rather traumatic shit throughout his hero career, and this chapter indicates that his teammates weren't exactly white knight type heroes. So for him to just trust the heroes after speaking with them, doesn't really work when in context he wouldn't. He appears almost paranoid and distrusting, and seems to imply that while he wanted to have the heroes work with the government his teammates did not and had no problem blatantly torturing people, corrupt as they may be. Being drugged, fought, and then kidnapped should invoke a much serious reaction than passing annoyance. It seems that the only reason he does agree with them, is for the sake of getting the plot going, instead of focusing on the Midoriya distrusting of the Heroes, he just nods and smiles for the sake of the plot. It feels forced and almost rushed. On top of that from the very first chapter it seems this whole conflict with the heroes seems completely unnecessary and is just used for drama. Now Izuku is well in his rights to be suspicious and this is even acknowledged, but you're telling me, that its fine that if someone asks how you know their name, attacking them is acceptable? Let's not even forget that if Izuku is half as popular as I suspected he would be, that people at the very least occasionally cosplaying as him wouldn't happen? It's not as if he was some standard hero, he was essentially the symbol of peace, just like all might in cannon, so again I find it difficult to believe that 200 years later, heroes would feel attacking him is the smart or right thing to do, now admittedly there are heroes becoming heroes purely for fame and money, but the point remains the same, Izuku was not weak according to what other characters talk about in any way. Now let's continue with this trail of thought, if Izuku was confronted and chased in broad daylight, and the news has been keeping up with this, then it stands to reason that the heroes have possibly caused a surge in villains rising. Here's why: When it comes out, and like or not it would, regardless of the League of Villains spreading the info themselves or not, the public would sooner rather than later realize that the heroes were actively hunting down Izuku like he was a no good criminal or some property, and that would cause the support in heroes and in turn the government to plummet, many villain hopefuls would believe that Stain (if he even exists in this AU) is in the "right" and that the heroes and government are corrupt. There would at the least be protests in mass across the globe against this. Crime rates would be at their highest yet with all the chaos. So one must question why are the heroes acting so rashly and suspiciously? Again the MHA world has made it no secret that not everything is black and white, but it seems there heroes just reacted with violence so we can have action, none of them seem to consider the repercussions of their actions in the slightest, no one considered the fallout this would have with the general public. They again don't seem to care in the slightest that he's one of the most popular and most well like heroes in history at all, so it begs the question as to why. Their only excuse is told as "no quirk has time travel this is impossible!" and "well we don't know what he's like or how his mental state is, especially after time travel!" But the problem with this is, while being mystified by a villain with a time travel quirk is understandable but, considering the fact the villain "Mister Calamity" essentially was creating black holes? They've had 200 years to know this information, but they find it unbelievable that the villains quirk may not have been black hole creation? Then with the second part, well quite plainly, it just doesn't work with the first chapter. The first chapter at the end had a new segment talking about why Izuku is so popular and well known, but if he is widely regarded as the first hero, or at least the greatest idealistic take on a hero at the time, then it makes no sense as to why they'd jump the gun to capture him! Am I crazy for thinking that at the very least some of these characters would be against wrongful imprisonment or vilifying in all likeliness their childhood hero? Maybe if Izuku in this AU was seen as a morally grey or dark kind of hero, but in this context it doesn't work as Izuku is as I've said from what you've wrote, the symbol of peace for the first generation of heroes. So this whole hunt down and damn near kill Izuku plot doesn't really make sense in the slightest.

Again this story has great potential, but the whole heroes kidnapping Midoriya really hurts it in terms of quality as it seems to be, again, all for the sake of drama, action, and the sake of the plot. I do apologize if it feels like I'm being unfair or overly criticizing to the point of flaming here, but personally I feel that this story has quite a lot of potential, but with such glaring plot holes it takes the reader out of the immersion of the story... I genuinely want to enjoy this fic, as I believe it has plenty of potential as I've said more than once in this review. But... I just can't get over these issues. So hopefully in the future this story will perhaps address these plot holes, correct them or perhaps simply put will make far more sense in future chapters. Though you are the author so you may do what you wish, this is merely just my thoughts on this story so far.
ShadowFlameDragon03 chapter 3 . 6/6/2019
This is a really great story, you should continue?
The Kromann chapter 3 . 5/28/2019
Extremely interesting and I can't wait for more!
RHJunior chapter 3 . 5/22/2019
"hero registration" as a concept springs from the same font of paranoia and lust for power that leads to people trying to erase the right to bear arms... and uses the same bumper-sticker slogan excuses, written to inspire mistrust in your fellow man and the delusion that your next door neighbor is somehow less trustworthy with power and liberty than some suited power-lusting politician or bureaucrat a thousand miles away. The desire to breed the populace into a herd of helpless, dependent sheep who will do anything those in power say and (most importantly) never, ever threaten their hold on that power, no matter how incompetent or evil those at the top prove themselves.
jWatson-Holmes chapter 1 . 5/7/2019
Ohhhohohoho
123 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »