Reviews for Exxxtra Credit
Venom Spirit chapter 1 . 2/29
The balls on this kid!
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 5 . 2/1
Hahaha this chapter was hilarious
Inthretis chapter 8 . 12/5/2019
This is the best and worst chapter of this story yet. I love it so much. Money.
Handsomistic1 chapter 8 . 11/24/2019
Hey yo. Binged the whole story. At first I thought Weiss' source was Neo, but now I think it's Blake. She's probably the best option for stealth. Anyway great stuff all around.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
psp reader chapter 8 . 11/14/2019
Ooh boy, jealousy? Hehe
User 627 chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
Read a few chapters into it, and I have to say it's definitely good for a few laughs. Something about watching a guy fail yet somehow succeed is a confusing balance that is somehow entertaining.

But if I have to take it seriously, I'd have to say that I absolutely despise Jaune's character here. It doesn't help that I already don't have too high of an opinion of him to begin with. Jaune is just lazy, uninterested in putting in the hard work of being a hunstman, and is looking for an easy way out. He makes weak excuses to be even lazier and his latest get-grades-quick scheme is to seduce Glynda Goodwitch. He buys her expensive glasses (even though it really wasn't even his money) and constantly tries to woo her not because of any real developing feelings or infatuation, but because he just wants better grades. Part of me can't help but think Glynda doesn't deserve that.

To top it all off, Jaune's fake transcript submission really doesn't help better my opinion of him when everyone else is putting in the work and he's just lazying through. It makes me wish that someone would at least call him out on it seriously. The guy deserves a reality check.

I know this is a parody, and I really like it, don't get me wrong. But it's difficult for me to personally find Jaune the lovable dork you try to portray him when he's already such a hack of a character. He's basically big talk and no common sense before relying on his friends to bail him out (Weiss' money, anybody?). The one pure exception where I found him likable was when he battled Roman for the glasses.

But I guess that's the point, huh? Comedic sociopathy is pretty funny. Just look at Eric Cartman. Looking at it from that certain perspective, you succeed with flying colors. Thanks for the read, man~
Imyoshi chapter 8 . 10/26/2019
The Jaune Arc stalks its prey woefully and dutifully. Alas! He's been spotted...

She runs. He chases. She turns. He twists. The hunt is on! The world around them blurs into a singular line of sight and Glynda Goodwitch huffs in mild annoyance. What chance does he have of catching her?

Then out of the bushes comes Weiss Schnee, his faithful companion. The chase has two predators now. Glynda's annoyances turns into a slight panic and she picks up the pace. However, unlike the boy, the girl moves with a subtle grace. She's not so easily fooled.

Weiss, subspecies better known as White Queen, begins to dance around the prey, acting coy with subtle shifts. The distraction does its job as Glynda has forgotten to pay attention to the other predator. He sneaks into her blind side and reaches out to grip her wrist, applying a bit of pressure to keep her from escaping.

Then the games begin with the predator pulling her into his personal bubble. Before she knows what's going on, he's pressing her down, intentions almost all too clear. Hands dig into her spine, attacking key spots where aches and pains exists in order to immobilize her in a standstill. A terrible position for her to find herself in, succumbing to the weightlessness of her body's stress.

No!

She tackles him away and rushes past the foliage, unable to see past her nose in the tall grass. This doesn't deter her predator, if anything he chases more vigorously now. The White Queen's on her tail, too, holding a lemur between its mighty jaws.

She knows not what the lemur entails, until, no, she's lost their sent. Prey stuck between the White Queen's jaws, tall grass and splotches of blood has washed away her sent, but not other predator. His stance makes it nigh impossible to lose. A distraction? No. A warning. Glynda clicks her teeth and prances forward, keeping her pupils sharp for the White Queen.

Something stirs in the tall grass.
MagisterWriter chapter 7 . 10/22/2019
Starting from chapter 7 this story has become much greater than before. Chapter 8 is just hilarious. Keep up the good work.
epiccoolnessfactor3 chapter 8 . 10/21/2019
I wanna see more blushy Weiss but at the same time, goodwich hot. im torn
The Archivist of Nyx chapter 8 . 10/19/2019
100% worth the year long wait for an update. So many amazing scenes and Weiss catching a nasty case of Arc Fever! Whatever shall she do?

I will admit, this feels SO OoC for Jaune but it's too funny and actually makes it all the more better the further I delve in.

Jaune's goal is to seduce Glynda, but what will happen when he realizes he's fallen for her and no longer merely wants to improve his grades this way? How will she react when (because you know it's bound to happen) she learns why he started all of this in the first place, despite genuinely falling for her? And how many of Beacon's fine ladies will Jaune have to fend off at the Dance? I can't wait to find out!

Keep it up and never lose that brilliant flame of yours, mate
IROCK108 chapter 8 . 10/19/2019
Very noice.
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 10/19/2019
Good job on the start. I say good luck on your tries with Miss Goodwitch
Kinato chapter 8 . 10/19/2019
U take ur sweet time uploading :( and imyoshi does cover art but doesn't upload. What world am i living in :/
Spartan0X BK201 chapter 8 . 10/18/2019
Sooner or later Weiss gonna realize she groom Jaune to be the perfect boyfriend. Only to realize he has eyes on Glynda and not her. it's nice to know that you are still alive. keep up the good writing.
AxDevilman chapter 8 . 10/18/2019
All is forgiven with this hilarious piece of madness that this chapter is. Made me laugh like a clown.
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