Reviews for Partners in Crime (Read: Heroics)
TheIdeator chapter 5 . 8/2
Wild Card , I hope ?
BrawlBroMario chapter 11 . 8/1
This story is quite incredible. It's very very VERY well written and the writing direction as well as the divergence from canon is very well welcomed. This is by far one of the best character driven stories I've ever read of FanFiction. I eagerly await an update.
MisterManGuy chapter 11 . 6/23
Thank for the chapter! I'm a fan of the friendship between Kuin and Toga and also getting more and more curious at what Minato's hero name is.
hellfire45 chapter 11 . 6/16
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and the fights were awesome
JediTaco chapter 11 . 6/12
Loved the way you wrote his inner monologue. Makes sense why overhauls so adamant on his stance when he has someone like this under him.
yo chapter 11 . 6/10
How was the hostage situation & subsequent 'game' reported? It'll probably be in the next chapter as part of the aftermath, but it stood out to me that for all the gloating & feeling of loss, it wasn't obvious how the public were seeing it since the local helicopter was repurposed - well unless that'd be just icing on the cake for Tomura & additional misery for the heroes. I suppose another villain was handling the newscaster camera, though given the portal shenanigans & multiple change of locations, it might need equipment that perhaps didn't get retrieved before the untimely departure from the helicopter. If it was on a cellphone, that could be moderated by the websites until it goes viral. Perhaps then the heroes will have time to plan damage control before it becomes widespread news.

Oof, the atmosphere of the story leaves me torn - for all the additional good Minato is providing, the darker? more serious? take on BnHA is balancing it out. No time to relax when one is Minato~

I look forward to the next update!
TDNRYCON chapter 10 . 6/10
I don't understand how this fanfic has less reviews than that New Beginnings fanfic, well at least the follows and favorite make up for it.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/6
Everything continues to suck, but I'm not getting any sadder.
Kraftykidd chapter 11 . 6/5
Can’t wait for more, though I will say it’s becoming infuriating and just plain mean to continue to withhold Minato’s Hero Name. Seriously, at this point you’re dangling it in front of us like a jackass. Please don’t. It’s doing nothing for this story as it’s time as a gag has long passed.

I hope that as Minato uses his Persona’s more and more often, he can manifest their powers more and more literally, like where his current strength in manifesting their power is only at 1/10th of what it could be. Him going up to 5/10ths has him take on some physical designation of who he is manifesting, and at full manifestation he either becomes the persona in full, or it manifests outside of him like in the games. I also think eventually him having a moment of Total Full Manifestation of every Persona would be totally awesome.

Also, I hope to see Minato finally interacting more with his peers. Actual personal plot development, rather than him there just reacting to BNHA’s normal plot. Have him be a normal person, romance, friendship, and other issues all. Have a personal mission to do, etc. Anyway, it’s been fun so far. Waiting for the next chap when you get to it.
Takedo chapter 3 . 6/3
To be honest, your grammar is pretty Gucci. I can see why no one would beta when you're pretty good.
Matemeo3 chapter 11 . 6/2
Minato in this fits a very unique role as a character. He's not some pinnacle force of power, nor is he exactly week. He plays the role of a minor attacker and supporter/debuffer. He's quite similar to an all-around build from the games, and this allows him to help in almost every situation. Sure, it's a bit disappointing that we won't really be seeing many of those AWE moments, but his place in this universe seems to have a more natural fit with these other characters. He's no Messiah, yet, but he's definitely nowhere near useless.

I do hope he eventually gets an invoker though. You describing what personas he bringing into his mind's eye is lightly scratching that itch, but I'm waiting for a full-on release at some point. I long to eventually see an actual summoning. Beyond all that, I have nothing else but absolute thanks for the chapter! You're amazing.
Suzululu4moe chapter 11 . 6/1
Scary bunny indeed.

Ahaha endeavor meets the worlds most versatile sidekick .

For once having a psychotic bff is a good thing. himiko has her priorities right.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 11 . 6/1
Another excellent chapter! Keep up the great work!
LegendaryMob chapter 11 . 5/31
This is so damn epic! Thanks for the chapter and hope for more!

On the other note. Minato's hero name is probably suicibo- Thanatos or something related to death or misfortune or whatever
Berix chapter 11 . 5/31
Wonderful chapter! I especially liked how long it was compared to the previous few, giving me a ton to read. One thing that I could see being improved would be a bit more clarity with what is actually occurring around the hostage situation, though I mostly chalk up my own lack of knowledge to not having seen MHA, as well as the naturally vague writing style you seem to use. I look forward to the next update with eagerness!
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